Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Our Posh New Den"Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
31 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Sandra,
This is a story of how often we miss making friends because of fear or lack of trying. This shows how courage can cause a happy outcome all around. It also shows how generosity builds friendship.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful rest of the weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hi Sandra,
This is a story of how often we miss making friends because of fear or lack of trying. This shows how courage can cause a happy outcome all around. It also shows how generosity builds friendship.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful rest of the weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hi Joan, thank you so much for going back into my portfolio for this one, I'm delighted you enjoyed reading it. I wrote several books about this gang of friends.
How is your book doing? I hope it's going well. 🥰 Warmest hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You're most welcome, Sandra. I think I have read some to the others too.
I have sold 15 copies. I emailed everyone on my list. Now I am going to see if I can send a message to all my Facebook friends for marketing.
Joan
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That is such a good idea, Joan. I put a photo of my cover on Facebook and a short synopsis of the story. But I think I will do what you have done as well! Great news, my friend. :)) xx
Comment from mumsyone
Another cute story that children should enjoy. Rhyme and meter are good, and it's a fun read.
"We've thought and we've thought," Vicky said with (a) sigh,
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Another cute story that children should enjoy. Rhyme and meter are good, and it's a fun read.
"We've thought and we've thought," Vicky said with (a) sigh,
Comment Written 17-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much, mumsyone, for the lovely review, and thank you for picking up that missing (a) I will put that in straight away! I am really pleased you enjoyed the story! Thank you. xsx
Comment from fictionwriter
This is such a cute story. It sure would make children think about how they view others they don't know. I loved it, and saw no room for improvements. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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This is such a cute story. It sure would make children think about how they view others they don't know. I loved it, and saw no room for improvements. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you for this lovely review, fictionwriter, I am so pleased you enjoyed my little friends story! Thank you. xsx
Comment from kashmayank
I havent read the initial part so would not be nice to comment on it but this was good although in my opinion the length could have been shortened
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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I havent read the initial part so would not be nice to comment on it but this was good although in my opinion the length could have been shortened
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you for reviewing my story/poem, kashmayank. The length of this one was short compared to some of the stories, and as this is the 3rd book in the series and the first will be in the shops next month having been snapped up by the publishers, I don't think I will shorten them. I am pleased that you thought it was good though! Thank you.
Comment from Chris Tee
Sandra This children's poem titled "Our Posh New Den" is an absolutely delightful read and My grandchildren will be hearing this one on Saturday. Your rhyming couplets are excellent and made the poem polished. Great job!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Sandra This children's poem titled "Our Posh New Den" is an absolutely delightful read and My grandchildren will be hearing this one on Saturday. Your rhyming couplets are excellent and made the poem polished. Great job!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you so very much, Chris, for this absolutely wonderful review! I do appreciate your comments and I am pleased you enjoyed the read! xsx
Comment from MikoAmaya
lol How delightful! Not only is it a fun poem that could entertain children, it also has a lesson about friendship in it! Great job and thanks for sharing! :)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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lol How delightful! Not only is it a fun poem that could entertain children, it also has a lesson about friendship in it! Great job and thanks for sharing! :)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you MikoAmaya for your wonderful review, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! xsx
Comment from Zombie's Woof
Sorry, not very good at fixing Spag.
If you need that, you should hire an editor.
I enjoyed reading your poem... sure
all the kids will love it!
Excellent! ZW
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Sorry, not very good at fixing Spag.
If you need that, you should hire an editor.
I enjoyed reading your poem... sure
all the kids will love it!
Excellent! ZW
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you, ZW, for your lovely review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. xsx
Comment from J. Dark
I am a huge fan of story poems for children and I really liked this. It is the sort of thing I would have liked my children to have read when they were slightly younger and would certainly have enjoyed reading it to them. The language is perfect for children and easily understandable to them without being patronising - not always easy when you are writing for children as it limits your dialogue! Hope you do really well with this.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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I am a huge fan of story poems for children and I really liked this. It is the sort of thing I would have liked my children to have read when they were slightly younger and would certainly have enjoyed reading it to them. The language is perfect for children and easily understandable to them without being patronising - not always easy when you are writing for children as it limits your dialogue! Hope you do really well with this.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Mrs Dark, I am so pleased you enjoyed this story poem, thank you! xsx
Comment from Deejharrington
I did not see anything that needed editing. It reads easily and keeps the interest. The message or lesson is there but doesn't "hit" the reader in the face:) You should never make quick judgments about people. There might be a very good reason for their actions.
deb
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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I did not see anything that needed editing. It reads easily and keeps the interest. The message or lesson is there but doesn't "hit" the reader in the face:) You should never make quick judgments about people. There might be a very good reason for their actions.
deb
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review, I am so pleased you enjoyed the story. I have a lesson in all the stories, but not so the children would realize it. Thank you again, I appreciate your comments a lot! xsx
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from dmt1967
I love this poem I wanted to give you a six but I can't do that as I have given you 2 in the last thirty days and they wont let me give you a third one thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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I love this poem I wanted to give you a six but I can't do that as I have given you 2 in the last thirty days and they wont let me give you a third one thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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The fact that you liked it that much is worth more than a 6 to me. Thank you so very much for this lovely review! Sandra xsx