A Poet's Plea
write a love poem for me20 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem seems to be a plea for readers to read and understand that a poem is a part of a person's nature as well as being inspires by all that surrounds a person. Creation breeds creation. It also speaks to every writer's dream to be remembered.
The poem has easy unforced rhymes and a smooth meter.
The artwork shows the whirlwind of thought and emotion that goes into a poem
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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This poem seems to be a plea for readers to read and understand that a poem is a part of a person's nature as well as being inspires by all that surrounds a person. Creation breeds creation. It also speaks to every writer's dream to be remembered.
The poem has easy unforced rhymes and a smooth meter.
The artwork shows the whirlwind of thought and emotion that goes into a poem
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thanks so much for popping in!
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You are so very welcome.
dragonpoet
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You are so very welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from evesayshi
Although the "Six Star" rating is not an option here, I would gladly rate this a "Six Star" work - absolutely BEAUTIFUL in its artistry and articulation...
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015
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Although the "Six Star" rating is not an option here, I would gladly rate this a "Six Star" work - absolutely BEAUTIFUL in its artistry and articulation...
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015
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Wow thank you!
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You are very welcome...
Comment from Laidy
I thought this was fantastically written and well worded. I like that in the poem not only is it the writers night but it is shared with the angels and is stated that its "our" night. I like the poem is inviting and doesnt feel selffish. Fast paced and exciting between the music, dancing and angels. loved it.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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I thought this was fantastically written and well worded. I like that in the poem not only is it the writers night but it is shared with the angels and is stated that its "our" night. I like the poem is inviting and doesnt feel selffish. Fast paced and exciting between the music, dancing and angels. loved it.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Wow, thank you so very much for stopping by. How did you find this one?
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I was browsing through poems and yours came up with an award. A poem that good shouldn't be passed up ;)
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aw, thanks so much. I'm glad you stopped by!
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I hadn't been on in a long time so I was trying to catch up on my reading. :) Glad I could read your post.
Comment from TJayK
Absolutely beautiful! I cannot describe the emotions that washed over me when I read this. The aabb rhyme scheme is brilliantly implemented and the images your words invoke are beyond description. Thank you for something so profoundly touching.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Absolutely beautiful! I cannot describe the emotions that washed over me when I read this. The aabb rhyme scheme is brilliantly implemented and the images your words invoke are beyond description. Thank you for something so profoundly touching.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Wow, thanks TJayK! I so appreciate you stopping in and the garland of stars is a wonderful treat.
Comment from poetbear
This is a gem and a jewel of awrite.
Lovely use poetic devices.
Reads well and flows well.
Makes sense.
Touches and embraces all the senses.
A must read!!!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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This is a gem and a jewel of awrite.
Lovely use poetic devices.
Reads well and flows well.
Makes sense.
Touches and embraces all the senses.
A must read!!!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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Thanks poetbear. :)
Comment from Mrs Jones
Certainly a pro. Hit me straight in the heart. A joy to read.
"come dance with me between the lines" nice... Your verse is beautiful and perfect.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Certainly a pro. Hit me straight in the heart. A joy to read.
"come dance with me between the lines" nice... Your verse is beautiful and perfect.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Hello darling, Rose! Thanks so much for visiting me portfolio!
Comment from BeasPeas
This poem is very nice. I particularly like the second stanza, although last two lines of first,
"My hope is that you'll sing along
Oh singer of my deepest songs." is a close second.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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This poem is very nice. I particularly like the second stanza, although last two lines of first,
"My hope is that you'll sing along
Oh singer of my deepest songs." is a close second.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2012
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Thanks Beas!
Comment from Joan E.
Many thanks for sharing your plea and singing the "writer's song." I admired your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains. I enjoyed your imperatives and use of alliteration to intensify the message. Well crafted and dramatically presented with such an intriguing picture too! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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Many thanks for sharing your plea and singing the "writer's song." I admired your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains. I enjoyed your imperatives and use of alliteration to intensify the message. Well crafted and dramatically presented with such an intriguing picture too! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 21-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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Joan, what a wonderful review and thank you for the six stars!
Interestingly enough, this poem (minus very few alterations) was first written in reverse!
Thanks for reviewing!
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I had that happen twice. I call it a happy accident! Thanks for sharing the back-story. Merry, merry- Joan
Comment from Diny
Oh how our minds mingle with sympathetic yearnings. MY FAVORITE LINE was come dance w me between the lines! Very poet
Poetically expressed with a true spirt of the romantic heart. Pure ballet of wordsmithing! Hugs dear one.Di
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2012
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Oh how our minds mingle with sympathetic yearnings. MY FAVORITE LINE was come dance w me between the lines! Very poet
Poetically expressed with a true spirt of the romantic heart. Pure ballet of wordsmithing! Hugs dear one.Di
Comment Written 21-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2012
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Thanks Diny!! We need to catch up!
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is a beauty Jewel, everything about it speaks volumes of the romantic feelings, needs requests. May they be filled for you. I enjoyed this one.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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This is a beauty Jewel, everything about it speaks volumes of the romantic feelings, needs requests. May they be filled for you. I enjoyed this one.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Thank you, Maureen.