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Viewing comments for Chapter 89 "The Lathe of Heaven"Assorted poetry
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Comment from gazzagodbod
classic film and a wonderful haiku to compliment it perfect picture to well done my friend and all the best in the contest gazza
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2013
classic film and a wonderful haiku to compliment it perfect picture to well done my friend and all the best in the contest gazza
Comment Written 13-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. Bill
Comment from dmt1967
I can't tell what the movie is but then these kind of movies are to scary for me anyway lol very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
I can't tell what the movie is but then these kind of movies are to scary for me anyway lol very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from eowyn0003
I understand it a little better, and I think I may have seen this movie after all. After it was shown on PBS, was it shown on A&E, before they became crime and reality show central?
Lura
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
I understand it a little better, and I think I may have seen this movie after all. After it was shown on PBS, was it shown on A&E, before they became crime and reality show central?
Lura
Comment Written 12-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Thank you for reviewing. It's the story of a guy whose dreams change reality. A psychologist hypnotizes him and tries to suggest dreams to create a utopia. The guy's mind interprets the suggestions differently and ends up creating a plague to end the population problem, turning everyone gray to end racism, and creating invading martians so men would stop fighting each other. "Based on Ursula K. Le Guin's novel and made for public television in 1979, this landmark sci-fi picture had been unbroadcast since 1983 when it finally surfaced on video in 2000. Essentially a classy variation on the admonition to be careful what you wish for because you just might get it, it was the first original film ever produced for public television and acquired a strong cult following on the basis of a handful of showings."
Comment from Mrs Jones
I have not seen this movie so thanks for the short description. Seems scary but, the words are well chosen and structure perfect.
Well done
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
I have not seen this movie so thanks for the short description. Seems scary but, the words are well chosen and structure perfect.
Well done
Comment Written 12-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2013
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Thank you for reviewing. It's the story of a guy whose dreams change reality. A psychologist hypnotizes him and tries to suggest dreams to create a utopia. The guy's mind interprets the suggestions differently and ends up creating a plague to end the population problem, turning everyone gray to end racism, and creating invading martians so men would stop fighting each other. "Based on Ursula K. Le Guin's novel and made for public television in 1979, this landmark sci-fi picture had been unbroadcast since 1983 when it finally surfaced on video in 2000. Essentially a classy variation on the admonition to be careful what you wish for because you just might get it, it was the first original film ever produced for public television and acquired a strong cult following on the basis of a handful of showings."
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the movie, i never heard of it before, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the movie, i never heard of it before, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you for reviewing. It's the story of a guy whose dreams change reality. A psychologist hypnotizes him and tries to suggest dreams to create a utopia. The guy's mind interprets the suggestions differently and ends up creating a plague to end the population problem, turning everyone gray to end racism, and creating invading martians so men would stop fighting each other. "Based on Ursula K. Le Guin's novel and made for public television in 1979, this landmark sci-fi picture had been unbroadcast since 1983 when it finally surfaced on video in 2000. Essentially a classy variation on the admonition to be careful what you wish for because you just might get it, it was the first original film ever produced for public television and acquired a strong cult following on the basis of a handful of showings."
Comment from Treischel
Wonderfully written example of a 5-7-5 Haiku movie review. Not familiar with particular, but looks very intriguing. Utopia becomes chaos, a common human experience. Very nice!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
Wonderfully written example of a 5-7-5 Haiku movie review. Not familiar with particular, but looks very intriguing. Utopia becomes chaos, a common human experience. Very nice!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you for reviewing. It's the story of a guy whose dreams change reality. A psychologist hypnotizes him and tries to suggest dreams to create a utopia. The guy's mind interprets the suggestions differently and ends up creating a plague to end the population problem, turning everyone gray to end racism, and creating invading martians so men would stop fighting each other. "Based on Ursula K. Le Guin's novel and made for public television in 1979, this landmark sci-fi picture had been unbroadcast since 1983 when it finally surfaced on video in 2000. Essentially a classy variation on the admonition to be careful what you wish for because you just might get it, it was the first original film ever produced for public television and acquired a strong cult following on the basis of a handful of showings."
Comment from LaDonnaCole
This was hard to review since I have not seen the movie.
I'll bet others who have a frame of reference would like it.
The syllables are right and the picture gives me chills.
Thank you.
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
This was hard to review since I have not seen the movie.
I'll bet others who have a frame of reference would like it.
The syllables are right and the picture gives me chills.
Thank you.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you for reviewing. It's the story of a guy whose dreams change reality. A psychologist hypnotizes him and tries to suggest dreams to create a utopia. The guy's mind interprets the suggestions differently and ends up creating a plague to end the population problem, turning everyone gray to end racism, and creating invading martians so men would stop fighting each other. "Based on Ursula K. Le Guin's novel and made for public television in 1979, this landmark sci-fi picture had been unbroadcast since 1983 when it finally surfaced on video in 2000. Essentially a classy variation on the admonition to be careful what you wish for because you just might get it, it was the first original film ever produced for public television and acquired a strong cult following on the basis of a handful of showings."
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Ooohh! I will have to see if I can find it! I love a good campy sci fi flick.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Change reality indeed. Good thoughtout work in this. A well tailored choice of words still producing good meaning.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
Change reality indeed. Good thoughtout work in this. A well tailored choice of words still producing good meaning.
ola thomas
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Ola, Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Matthew M.
Okay, this is killing me. This is the second movie in a row that I haven't heard of. I might need to go see this one as it looks like a genre that I might like. I am guessing Habner and George Orr are characters. It fits the criteria of a haiku, so it's appropriate for this contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
Okay, this is killing me. This is the second movie in a row that I haven't heard of. I might need to go see this one as it looks like a genre that I might like. I am guessing Habner and George Orr are characters. It fits the criteria of a haiku, so it's appropriate for this contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you for reviewing. It's the story of a guy whose dreams change reality. A psychologist hypnotizes him and tries to suggest dreams to create a utopia. The guy's mind interprets the suggestions differently and ends up creating a plague to end the population problem, turning everyone gray to end racism, and creating invading martians so men would stop fighting each other. "Based on Ursula K. Le Guin's novel and made for public television in 1979, this landmark sci-fi picture had been unbroadcast since 1983 when it finally surfaced on video in 2000. Essentially a classy variation on the admonition to be careful what you wish for because you just might get it, it was the first original film ever produced for public television and acquired a strong cult following on the basis of a handful of showings."
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Oh I was seven and didn't have TV when it came out. Mama always said stay away from cults, so I apply that to classics too. Now I don't feel so bad for having missed it. Though it does sound interesting.
Comment from adewpearl
I know nothing about the Lathe of Heaven, which makes me pretty useless as a reviewer of this post
It is in good 5/7/5 form
I really wish I could give you more useful feedback. Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
I know nothing about the Lathe of Heaven, which makes me pretty useless as a reviewer of this post
It is in good 5/7/5 form
I really wish I could give you more useful feedback. Brooke
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Brooke, Thank you for reviewing. It's the story of a guy whose dreams change reality. A psychologist hypnotizes him and tries to suggest dreams to create a utopia. The guy's mind interprets the suggestions differently and ends up creating a plague to end the population problem, turning everyone gray to end racism, and creating invading martians so men would stop fighting each other.
"Based on Ursula K. Le Guin's novel and made for public television in 1979, this landmark sci-fi picture had been unbroadcast since 1983 when it finally surfaced on video in 2000. Essentially a classy variation on the admonition to be careful what you wish for because you just might get it, it was the first original film ever produced for public television and acquired a strong cult following on the basis of a handful of showings."