Three little words were never said.
A child growing up without love16 total reviews
Comment from ShatiaBizzell
I love this piece because I understand the power that those three little words hold. Some people use it for good, some people use it for bad, and some people don't use it at all. No matter whose hand its in those three little words can hold power that can be destructive or instrumental.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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I love this piece because I understand the power that those three little words hold. Some people use it for good, some people use it for bad, and some people don't use it at all. No matter whose hand its in those three little words can hold power that can be destructive or instrumental.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for that review, you are perfectly right about everything you said, I thank you for that. Mary.
Comment from Eigle Rull
I cannot imagine a life without my mother telling me constantly that she loved me. It would definitely make me very depressed.
This poem was very well written in easy to read words. The poem flowed well to tell your heartfelt story in easy to understand words too. It was interesting, and it held my attention. It was well worth reading. It was excellent in my opinion. I found no errors at all.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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I cannot imagine a life without my mother telling me constantly that she loved me. It would definitely make me very depressed.
This poem was very well written in easy to read words. The poem flowed well to tell your heartfelt story in easy to understand words too. It was interesting, and it held my attention. It was well worth reading. It was excellent in my opinion. I found no errors at all.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thank you for that detailed review. I am glad that you liked it.
Comment from Treischel
You painted a poignant picture with is lovely poem using an abab rhyming scheme and sad reflections that engender a mood of rejection and understandable yearning. Usually mothers are more compassionate. Men are much more likely to behave that way. I know my dad was. Anyway, thanks for sharing this poignant piece.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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You painted a poignant picture with is lovely poem using an abab rhyming scheme and sad reflections that engender a mood of rejection and understandable yearning. Usually mothers are more compassionate. Men are much more likely to behave that way. I know my dad was. Anyway, thanks for sharing this poignant piece.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
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Thanks for that detailed review, I appreciate it.
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well this is saddening tale written in perfect rhyme... obviously the maternal instinct wasn't strong in that one. I think all children should be loved by someone, even if it is not the one they want, makes me wonder sometime how orphans must feel? Well I cannot say I love you because I don't know you well enough but I can say I love this poem! Hope that is good enough lol :)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Well this is saddening tale written in perfect rhyme... obviously the maternal instinct wasn't strong in that one. I think all children should be loved by someone, even if it is not the one they want, makes me wonder sometime how orphans must feel? Well I cannot say I love you because I don't know you well enough but I can say I love this poem! Hope that is good enough lol :)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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That is a lovely review I thank you so much for it. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem, you did hit the nail on the head when you said no maternal instinct, no intention of being cruel but no awareness of what a child needs.
Comment from gazzagodbod
hard to understand what a child goes through when they are without love a great poem my friend i think i would center the text but i loved it xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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hard to understand what a child goes through when they are without love a great poem my friend i think i would center the text but i loved it xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the comments and the review,That I have centered the text, thanks again.
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Wow looks great x
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Thanks for advice am new to all of this, so I do appreciate any help. xx
Comment from Gungalo
My heart was sad, my need was strong,
my mind knew, this had to be wrong
All I wanted to hear was" I love you"
those three words never said by you.
Jackarrie you have written of a little girl whose mother never told her she loved her. I find it so disheartening to think about this. Sigh.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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My heart was sad, my need was strong,
my mind knew, this had to be wrong
All I wanted to hear was" I love you"
those three words never said by you.
Jackarrie you have written of a little girl whose mother never told her she loved her. I find it so disheartening to think about this. Sigh.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thanks Gungalo for the review and rating, I appreciate it.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is a reminder to everyone that those three little words need to not only be said, but showed and cared for. We show with actions too. Good or bad. Great poem and Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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This is a reminder to everyone that those three little words need to not only be said, but showed and cared for. We show with actions too. Good or bad. Great poem and Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for the comment and the review I appreciate it.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Good rhyming in this poem. I am left to wonder if the mother was ever shown love in her own childhood. One cannot do what they have never been taught. Good artwork choice for this theme. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Good rhyming in this poem. I am left to wonder if the mother was ever shown love in her own childhood. One cannot do what they have never been taught. Good artwork choice for this theme. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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You know something, Midnight Writer, you really hit the nail on the head, what you said in your comment could not be any closer to the truth. well done in seeing where the poem is coming from.
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You are welcome, my friend. :)
Comment from persevere
What a heart-rending tale of a mother's omission to utter "I love you". I sincerely hope that you have heard those words since childhood.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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What a heart-rending tale of a mother's omission to utter "I love you". I sincerely hope that you have heard those words since childhood.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your comment.
Comment from ruhama
How very poignant. The artwork is very revealing. You portray your life as cold both outside and in. Good rhyming.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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How very poignant. The artwork is very revealing. You portray your life as cold both outside and in. Good rhyming.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your comments.