Comment from Uniqusatya

Excellent

Hey liked your expression here.This thing(birdies) had got me too to write about it.yuor work and picture too went well.
All wishes for the contest.
Good read.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

Thanks, Uniqustatya - Glad you liked this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Now that is a lot of bird poop... Your poem is as clever as your birdies. good luck in the contest. You aced the 5-7-5 syllable count. Carolyn

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OMG This is awful...This guy was parked in the wrong place at the wrong time...Very funny and very well written. And what a picture!!!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2013

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

A sure pickle for motorists to be in.
But sadly, there is no real fix unless you shoot constantly with a little bee-bee gun.
Charlene

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2013

Comment from Sueellen11

Excellent

Now this is a classic,,, how often this happens,,, this is a great entry into the contest,,, good luck,,, the picture is perfect what hammering they gave it,,, great write, blessings, sueellen

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2013

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

no doubt just came out of a car wash. hahaha. such is life. great entry. clever wording and perfect form. love that picture, mike

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013

thanks, mike - hope your freshly-washed car remains poop-free - glad you got a chuckle and liked the wording and picture -
appreciate your comments ... ;)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Great pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 format
sometimes you really do wonder if the birds have it in for us LOL
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013

Glad you got a laugh. Yes, the birds do have it in for us. They target my car regularly. Thanks, Brooke. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I'm guessing this car looks like the one on the set of Hitchcock's The Birds. Loved the tongue in cheek feeling to this. The flow and the imagery were perfect. Good luck washing the car. LOL.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013

Thanks! - glad you got a laugh, and that it reminded you of Hitchcocks's 'Tne Birds', a fascinating story where birds really have it in for us. I know they target my car regularly. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)

Comment from steevie

Excellent

I've had bird poop on my cars before, but nothing to this extent. I once had so much pollen on a light blue Gremlin once, that the entire roof and hood was a mustard color. It looked really cool. Two tone

all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013

Thanks! - Yep, a cool looking two-tone Gremlin, better than a car attacked and smothered in poop by birds that could star in Hitchcock's 'The Birds'. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

reply by steevie on 21-Sep-2013

The Birds

That was an awesome movie!!!

steve

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

Well, I shouldn't wonder that the driver of the car in the picture would be spittin' mad. It looks almost like it was on purpose. Syllable count and form is correct according to contest rules. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013

Thanks, Jeanie. Appreciate your comments ... ;)