Tall Tales and Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Beaver"Personal growth stories for children
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello Carolyn this is well written and a good fun children's poem it reads so beautifully they will love it we enjoyed well done regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Hello Carolyn this is well written and a good fun children's poem it reads so beautifully they will love it we enjoyed well done regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 21-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2013
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Thanks you two. :-) Carolyn
Comment from 9999pool
The beaver goes through great lenth and hard labor with his mouth and teeth to build a house of logs.
It is a humble home to feel safe and secure from the calls of the presators.
Quick, go into the home when the beaver splats. Stay inside until the coast is clear.
Great story for book-markers with a good message of home sweet home.
Cheerio, hugs, bro Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2013
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The beaver goes through great lenth and hard labor with his mouth and teeth to build a house of logs.
It is a humble home to feel safe and secure from the calls of the presators.
Quick, go into the home when the beaver splats. Stay inside until the coast is clear.
Great story for book-markers with a good message of home sweet home.
Cheerio, hugs, bro Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 20-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2013
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Thanks Ritchie, God's world is rich in inspiration for the aspiring writer. There is so much subject matter, we just need the time to cultivate the words. I hope you are having a great day, thanks for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
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Life is wonderful when we can find God's richness in so many things. Even a tiny raindrop on our hands can be such a wonder of nature, smiles.
Days are usually great here with plenty of sunshine and rain, smiles.
Cheerio, you have a lovely day too.
Hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi Carolyn,
This is a very graphic description of The beavers life.
The writing and the language is very implicit and full of imageries. I like it very much.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a very graphic description of The beavers life.
The writing and the language is very implicit and full of imageries. I like it very much.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 20-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2013
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Hi Benny, I have been a busy little beaver myself. :-) I am happy you enjoyed the visuals and the words. Have a great day, :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
A very great job Carol and I enjoyed reading this children's poem very much. Your rhyming was very easily done in neither of your rhymes were forced, labored or strained. I love the picture of really complement your poem very much and vice versa. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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A very great job Carol and I enjoyed reading this children's poem very much. Your rhyming was very easily done in neither of your rhymes were forced, labored or strained. I love the picture of really complement your poem very much and vice versa. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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What a nice review, thanks so much. :-) Carolyn
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You are so welcome Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Carolyn,
Nice poetry for children, easy words, great appeal and overall I think kids would like them.
Well penned post my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Dear Carolyn,
Nice poetry for children, easy words, great appeal and overall I think kids would like them.
Well penned post my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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I am glad you enjoyed this one Maureen, the book markers go over well. I pray you are having a great day, Love, Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this cute poem with interesting facts about the beaver, i hope you do well selling these. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this cute poem with interesting facts about the beaver, i hope you do well selling these. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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I am delighted you enjoyed reading The Beaver, thanks for the good wishes too. :-) Carolyn
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Such a cute poem, Carolyn. The accompanying pic is so very cute as well. Any child would love it. I love it too! :)
Laughed at your "flat" "splat" rhyme. :) I think kids would giggle at that for sure.
Great idea to make book markers out these poems!
Excellent!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Such a cute poem, Carolyn. The accompanying pic is so very cute as well. Any child would love it. I love it too! :)
Laughed at your "flat" "splat" rhyme. :) I think kids would giggle at that for sure.
Great idea to make book markers out these poems!
Excellent!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Thanks Connie, I do that pretty often, they make great little personal gifts, and for folks who desire a piece of my work, (since I have no book in print LOL) it is a fun way to be published. Thank you for your encouragement. :-) Carolyn
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Do you have your book markers laminated too? What a great gift idea! :)
Connie
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Yes, we finally purchased a laminating machine, it is quite cost effective and when I need more, I don't have the order and wait process to go through. Put re-order info on the back. Good luck if you decide to do it. Friends and family will love them as a gift from you and will purchase as gifts for others. Nice circle.. :-) Carolyn
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Your own laminating machine makes perfect sense, Carolyn. Thanks for sharing the re-order tip for the back. Certainly a unique alternative to placing poetry into a book.
Hope you sell tons of your book markers :)
Wishing you a wonderful day!
Hugs,
Connie
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a darling poem. I really enjoyed the read. I use to make poetic book-markers too, but they didn't sell too well. That was years ago.
Kat
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a darling poem. I really enjoyed the read. I use to make poetic book-markers too, but they didn't sell too well. That was years ago.
Kat
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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Maybe Dylan would like to hear this one read by his G-Grandma. I am happy you enjoyed The Beaver. Love, Carolyn
Comment from AprilShower
These stanzas are cute. I think I'll run some off for my nephews. I hope they will use them for book markers. I enjoyed reading this poem for children. Well done. Thank you for sharing.
April :o)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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These stanzas are cute. I think I'll run some off for my nephews. I hope they will use them for book markers. I enjoyed reading this poem for children. Well done. Thank you for sharing.
April :o)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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I am glad you enjoyed The Beaver. It was fun to write, kids and adults have liked it so far. :-) Carolyn
Comment from JMUwrites
This is a really fun poem Carolyn that you've written so well, one I'm sure that kids will enjoy...and well, adults like myself will enjoy it too! :)
Thanks for sharing and best wishes with it going forward!
Warmly,
Jeffrey
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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This is a really fun poem Carolyn that you've written so well, one I'm sure that kids will enjoy...and well, adults like myself will enjoy it too! :)
Thanks for sharing and best wishes with it going forward!
Warmly,
Jeffrey
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2013
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I appreciate your fun review, so far it has been enjoyed by kids and adults alike. :-) Thanks for the good wishes. Carolyn