One Christmas Night
A simple story in iambic pentameter.40 total reviews
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Wonderful poem on Christmas. We all have dreams and dream can be a reality. And I like the way you put that this dream transformed you. Yes many dreams have transformed our lives. Great.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Wonderful poem on Christmas. We all have dreams and dream can be a reality. And I like the way you put that this dream transformed you. Yes many dreams have transformed our lives. Great.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much for reading this very old post Kitbok. How did you happen to find it? I am so surprised! Thanks for the kind words. MM
Comment from Writerphoenix327
Very easy to see why this is rated all time best. You have such a gift for bringing your readers along on the journey, and I could see, hear and feel everything you spoke of. Such a gift.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Very easy to see why this is rated all time best. You have such a gift for bringing your readers along on the journey, and I could see, hear and feel everything you spoke of. Such a gift.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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My goodness! You dove deep to find this one! I'm amazed. But thank you so much for the exceptional rating and for the lovely comments too. I sincerely appreciate anyone who would bother to read my work for 2 cents. Hugs and gratitude! MM
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Christmas poem contest winner very well written and beautiful rhyme the class was adding the savior in it along with the semen imagery objective content was graceful as well as objektiv read well flowed well and no grammar issues and descriptive measures were aligned in perfect thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
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This is a Christmas poem contest winner very well written and beautiful rhyme the class was adding the savior in it along with the semen imagery objective content was graceful as well as objektiv read well flowed well and no grammar issues and descriptive measures were aligned in perfect thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
That sounds like a wonderful dream that led to faith. It seems a wonderful way to find the path to help you through any hard times.
Nice image of the dream. I like how it is a bit fuzzy like your feelings in the dream.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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That sounds like a wonderful dream that led to faith. It seems a wonderful way to find the path to help you through any hard times.
Nice image of the dream. I like how it is a bit fuzzy like your feelings in the dream.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Wow! You are reading Christmas poems already? Thank you so much for digging into my portfolio and for the kind review of this poem. I appreciate this very much. MM
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You're welcome. You could say it is a little early or a little late.
dragonpoet
Comment from GeorgieBoy
I pictured the scene very easily. The poem flows well and consistently, it falls into place like the snow falls. Sometimes a dream stays with us when we awake and lingers there until we get the message, don't you think?
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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I pictured the scene very easily. The poem flows well and consistently, it falls into place like the snow falls. Sometimes a dream stays with us when we awake and lingers there until we get the message, don't you think?
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Thank you for reviewing this old poem. I'm glad you found it. Your thoughts were lovely to read.
Comment from angelface2
MissMerri, this is indeed a winner. I love the beautiful winter scene, but above all I love your sweet poem, written with great rhythm. I love the last line of the last stanza best of all. Blessings on you. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
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MissMerri, this is indeed a winner. I love the beautiful winter scene, but above all I love your sweet poem, written with great rhythm. I love the last line of the last stanza best of all. Blessings on you. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
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I am so honored and pleased by this review, Miss Sally. Thank you for reading this and for the golden star crowing your beautiful words. I loved reading this. :p
Comment from Alaskastory
'One Christmas Night' is a poem found SUPER GREAT by me and everyone else! You paint a Christmas picture that must be repeated in every home year after year!!! I just loved reading it, MissM.
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'One Christmas Night' is a poem found SUPER GREAT by me and everyone else! You paint a Christmas picture that must be repeated in every home year after year!!! I just loved reading it, MissM.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
Comment from Merriweather
What a a wonderful poem. It deserves six stars. I love the imagery of stillness like silent night. The bird whose sound was as a bell, gentle chiming, sounding a sweet alarm. I am sure all nature was aware of the birth of the Christ child that starry night. Your poem flows well, and the story well told. I know how dreams can impact one's life. You have conveyed that message very skilfully in your poem.
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What a a wonderful poem. It deserves six stars. I love the imagery of stillness like silent night. The bird whose sound was as a bell, gentle chiming, sounding a sweet alarm. I am sure all nature was aware of the birth of the Christ child that starry night. Your poem flows well, and the story well told. I know how dreams can impact one's life. You have conveyed that message very skilfully in your poem.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
What a beautiful Christmas poem you have written. A true winner of the contest. Very nice rhyme used throughout this very readable poem. Very well done.
Kind regards
Sarah
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What a beautiful Christmas poem you have written. A true winner of the contest. Very nice rhyme used throughout this very readable poem. Very well done.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent. This poem has moving thoughts and expresses deep faith in the future. It is very well written and presented in a beautiful way. Great job.
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Excellent. This poem has moving thoughts and expresses deep faith in the future. It is very well written and presented in a beautiful way. Great job.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014