Comment from MagKing

Excellent

A very true saying.
Friendship indeed blossoms like flower. But To some extent it never dies even if the flower dies. Because it could still be extended by the other party to the dead flower's seed.
A good one indeed!

MagKing

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

I am so sorry for your loss of your friend...friendships can truly be like flowers...but none last forever...so very beautifully written...

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014

thank you for your kindness.

reply by l.raven on 15-Jan-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from suep

Excellent

I love your poem. It is both beautiful and heartbreaking. I'm so sorry for the loss of your friend. You've met the 15 word limit requirement, and in a beautiful presentation. Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014

thank you so much:)

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the flower. I like how you use flowers to describe your love for your friend. Friends are like flowers. They bring joy to your life. Thank goodness people last longer that flowers. Great work.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014

thank you so much.

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

I can feel your feelings. i had a friend that was like a sister, plus i worked for her and she died three years ago Feb.3rd. I know where she is and I'm sure she be a Heaven's gate to welcome me when I get there. Great poem. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014

I know my friend is looking down on her family and friends here too. Thanks for the review:)

Comment from Diny

Excellent

Good thoughts and I can feel emotions still hidden, raw between the words- perhaps dig deeper show us more a thought can be poetic yes- but it can also be the beginning of a greater piece- I still want more! Write on-Di

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014

I do plan to expand on this one but it was for a contest and had to be 15 words or less. thanks.

Comment from James Chaima Phiri

Excellent

This is a true saying. It is sad to note that you lost a friend recently. May God be with you in the period of mourning. It is a nice poem and I wish you the best in this contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014

thank you for your kind words and review.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hi :) I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful little poem inspired by your friend which adheres perfectly to the contest rules. Wonderfully presented also. I wish you the best of luck in the booths. Kindest regards, Debra

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014

thank you for your kind words and review.

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

good luck int he poem

lasting until the flower dies, or on FS, until the base certificate expires?

Hopefully they last longer than that.

nice piece and wonderful picture

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

thanks!

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

As per the contest rules, a short poem
but one that takes us on trip through
life with its joys, its sadness that comes
with the end of a life of friendship.
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

thank you!