Life Lesson Number One
Can I talk to you?7 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
Life lessons begin young -- and should stay with us all of our life. It works both ways, I am in my 70s and often learn wisdom from children. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Life lessons begin young -- and should stay with us all of our life. It works both ways, I am in my 70s and often learn wisdom from children. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for this kind and thoughtful review. I owe it to my Mom, for teaching me that most valuable lesson!
Comment from Lovinia
Hmmmmm well .... do we have a future Public Enemy No 1 here???? "Judo-chop".
Just luuuurve the Attitude! I have enjoyed this action packed little story. Seems to me flash fiction .... but I feel the pace in this cool due. It seems she' learned her lesson ... I hope so. LOL
Love the invite to the birthday party and the suggestion to bring a present. LOL Something different ... well done. Your image is superb and a perfect embellishment for your story. A great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxoxo
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Hmmmmm well .... do we have a future Public Enemy No 1 here???? "Judo-chop".
Just luuuurve the Attitude! I have enjoyed this action packed little story. Seems to me flash fiction .... but I feel the pace in this cool due. It seems she' learned her lesson ... I hope so. LOL
Love the invite to the birthday party and the suggestion to bring a present. LOL Something different ... well done. Your image is superb and a perfect embellishment for your story. A great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxoxo
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, Lovinia! This review is very encouraging and I'm so glad you saw the humor. Your comments are greatly appreciated. Hope you have a wonderful night!
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I think a good story well written. Of course you took a risk in writing about a cheeky little girl ..... some voters go for the happy or the sad, not necessarily the highly spirited child with attitude. Well done anyway. I enjoyed and you were actually right up there on my list ... I too voted for the happy. Sorry. Hugs - Lovi xoxox
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. a short, aweet little story. I think we all had to learn this lesson. It is always nice to know I wasn't the only one who had to learn the hard way.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Hello. a short, aweet little story. I think we all had to learn this lesson. It is always nice to know I wasn't the only one who had to learn the hard way.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much padumachitta, for your kind and encouraging review!
Comment from Delores J. Howard
This was a cute story with a wonderful little lesson enclosed. No problem with content. However, there are some errors with punctuation. Slowly proof-read and you'll catch them yourself, I'm sure. p.s. Good momma in this piece.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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This was a cute story with a wonderful little lesson enclosed. No problem with content. However, there are some errors with punctuation. Slowly proof-read and you'll catch them yourself, I'm sure. p.s. Good momma in this piece.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you Delores! Grammar is not my strong point! But I will look it over again to see if I can spot the errors, and thanks again for the heads up!
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
This is a gorgeous little story. I bet it's based on a real life story. This little girl certainly learnt her lesson.well written and great choice of artwork.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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This is a gorgeous little story. I bet it's based on a real life story. This little girl certainly learnt her lesson.well written and great choice of artwork.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words. I really appreciate your insights as well..
Comment from Ricky1024
Good luck with this.
Imagery, content, and lesson was well cast!
I think the picture helps to.
This subject was previously written and will be again,
my friend.
The heart of a child under the age of 8 according to
my church states that they hath not the ability to recognize write from wrong to the age of eight.
Here in NJ.
They once passed a law that the age of consent was completely legal at age ten!
Amen,
"What's happening to this planet?"
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Good luck with this.
Imagery, content, and lesson was well cast!
I think the picture helps to.
This subject was previously written and will be again,
my friend.
The heart of a child under the age of 8 according to
my church states that they hath not the ability to recognize write from wrong to the age of eight.
Here in NJ.
They once passed a law that the age of consent was completely legal at age ten!
Amen,
"What's happening to this planet?"
24.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Thank you Ricky 1024! Thank you for your insights and interesting comments... Much to ponder.
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Your welcome.
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A delightful short story written from a child's perspective.
It is difficult as a child to really want something so much and not understand why you can't have it.
You have planned the story well to start with a request, followed by a refusal which then results in an action and reaction.
A very interesting and effective short story.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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A delightful short story written from a child's perspective.
It is difficult as a child to really want something so much and not understand why you can't have it.
You have planned the story well to start with a request, followed by a refusal which then results in an action and reaction.
A very interesting and effective short story.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review!
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You're welcome.