Inflection
Slow Dancing45 total reviews
Comment from comanalbert
I love Frank Sinatra, with Fred I haven't had many interactions. I see you have a poem about each great artist.How about Celine Dion&Paul Anka "It's hard to say good-bye"? Just a suggestion...
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I love Frank Sinatra, with Fred I haven't had many interactions. I see you have a poem about each great artist.How about Celine Dion&Paul Anka "It's hard to say good-bye"? Just a suggestion...
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Albert! I'm always in the market for good ideas, my friend. THank you.
Comment from comanalbert
I love Frank Sinatra, with Fred I haven't had many interactions. I see you have a poem about each great artist.How about Celine Dion&Paul Anka "It's hard to say good-bye"? Just a suggestion...
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I love Frank Sinatra, with Fred I haven't had many interactions. I see you have a poem about each great artist.How about Celine Dion&Paul Anka "It's hard to say good-bye"? Just a suggestion...
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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THank you, my friend!
Comment from comanalbert
I love Frank Sinatra, with Fred I haven't had many interactions. I see you have a poem about each great artist.How about Celine Dion&Paul Anka "It's hard to say good-bye"? Just a suggestion...
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I love Frank Sinatra, with Fred I haven't had many interactions. I see you have a poem about each great artist.How about Celine Dion&Paul Anka "It's hard to say good-bye"? Just a suggestion...
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you, my friend.
Comment from harmony13
An excellent poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author's words are strong, creative and sad. The poem is thought provoking and the reader pondered on this poem.
The artwork is perfect and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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An excellent poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author's words are strong, creative and sad. The poem is thought provoking and the reader pondered on this poem.
The artwork is perfect and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, harmony. I really appreciate it.
Comment from L.A.Matthies
But songs create a vast illusion, and the music had to fade,
Along with skin-enkindled fusion and the chemistry it made.
- Isn't every girl just waiting for her skin-enkindled moments? I certainly am :)
Terrific job on this David ...bravo!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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But songs create a vast illusion, and the music had to fade,
Along with skin-enkindled fusion and the chemistry it made.
- Isn't every girl just waiting for her skin-enkindled moments? I certainly am :)
Terrific job on this David ...bravo!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you SO much, L.A. I have to admit I really like creating compound words with the ole hyphen. :-) I'm so glad you liked it! I appreciate your time, kind words, and review.
David
Comment from Gloria ....
Cole Porter wrote some really good tunes. I just watched De-Lovely and it was OK. Nothing to write home about but I suppose it provided a little background into the man's life. I love biographies even if they are fictionalized.
In truth, David, I think this is the best piece of yours I have read to date. But I am holding out for the one that is really going to rock my socks.
Yours in the deep FRYer,
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Cole Porter wrote some really good tunes. I just watched De-Lovely and it was OK. Nothing to write home about but I suppose it provided a little background into the man's life. I love biographies even if they are fictionalized.
In truth, David, I think this is the best piece of yours I have read to date. But I am holding out for the one that is really going to rock my socks.
Yours in the deep FRYer,
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Didn't he, though? Thanks SO much, Gloria. I think this may be my favorite of those I've written since I've been back here, and I appreciate you saying so. Feel free to hold out. The rogue likes that. ;-) See you Friday. Oiling up now...
Comment from michaelcahill
This seems like it is going to be mostly light hearted fun, but it begins to deepen and becomes a truly romantic piece. I love the effect of the music and the fantasy that develops of dancing like Astaire as Sinatra sings in the background. Of course, any generation can insert their own icons. Perfect subtle use of song and lyric. Any more than you used would be clunky (technical term there). "skin-enkindled fusion" is the kind of phrase that sets you apart and takes it up a notch. Wow. Whatever kind of poetry the reader writes that it definitely a "What's up now" phrase. Great piece, mikey
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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This seems like it is going to be mostly light hearted fun, but it begins to deepen and becomes a truly romantic piece. I love the effect of the music and the fantasy that develops of dancing like Astaire as Sinatra sings in the background. Of course, any generation can insert their own icons. Perfect subtle use of song and lyric. Any more than you used would be clunky (technical term there). "skin-enkindled fusion" is the kind of phrase that sets you apart and takes it up a notch. Wow. Whatever kind of poetry the reader writes that it definitely a "What's up now" phrase. Great piece, mikey
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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It does definitely take a turn, doesn't it, Mikey? Thanks so much for recognizing that, and for the kind words. I do so like using hyphenated words for some compound fun.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, another beautiful poem, so very tender and romantic. Perfect cadence and lovely imagery evoked, as well as the very effective rhyme...I honestly feel so unable to critique, yet again - there's not a thing out of place to my eye or ear or sentiment. You've even chosen wonderful songs! (*smile*)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Wow, another beautiful poem, so very tender and romantic. Perfect cadence and lovely imagery evoked, as well as the very effective rhyme...I honestly feel so unable to critique, yet again - there's not a thing out of place to my eye or ear or sentiment. You've even chosen wonderful songs! (*smile*)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Wow, Dawn. Thank you so much. I really, really appreciate it!
Comment from Maria C.
Your center rhymes and end rhymes in your couplets are so good. That just makes it. Perfect meter as always. This tells a good though sad story. I am surprised you know who Sinatra is. Nice references to his songs.
Another great. I don't know how you have the time to turn these out like you do.
Blessings,
Maria C.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Your center rhymes and end rhymes in your couplets are so good. That just makes it. Perfect meter as always. This tells a good though sad story. I am surprised you know who Sinatra is. Nice references to his songs.
Another great. I don't know how you have the time to turn these out like you do.
Blessings,
Maria C.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, Maria! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good, solid rhyming couplets. Good internal rhyming. Good end rhyming and perfect rhyming with say/day...tears/years...missed/kissed...fade/made. Good complimentary photo followed by a thought provoking message.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Good, solid rhyming couplets. Good internal rhyming. Good end rhyming and perfect rhyming with say/day...tears/years...missed/kissed...fade/made. Good complimentary photo followed by a thought provoking message.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, RR.