Comment from EMB

Excellent

Wow. This would make an awesome beginning to a novel of some kind (before getting to the "movie" part). But I don't think that the protagonist has been introduced yet. :)

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thank you very much for your time and review.

Comment from mickbey

Excellent

An original and creative story, everything was well timed, you used a good set-up to lure the reader into one line of thought, and then came with the 'twist' at the end, that was clever and made for a good ending, nice work, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, it's nice to know that there are still some perks to be had when making "B" movies. Like all of the delicious, gooey sweet fake blood you can drink, LOL...

Nice twist at the end.

Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thanks for reading Dean. Glad you liked it.

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

good luck in the contest
I think the meaning is better if it reads she is unchained. . .


oh good grief, the ending fooled me. you little. . .devil, you

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

You had me going there for a while! A nice twist in the tail! You have woven an entertaining short story out of these words1 Should do well in the contest, I think!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thank you very much for the kind words and for the review.