Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu, My Leading Light, touches on the human aspect of this form and accentuates The importance of guidance. Whether it is a person, spirit, or the North Star, we all seek a path and a pathfinder. Nice.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

I so appreciate your thoughtful analysis of my senryu. Thank you.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well! The author words are clear, creative and strong. The last line puts the poem all together.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014

Your positive comments have made my day . Thank you so much.

Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow

Excellent

I love her artwork, I use it all the time with my own verses. Love your dedication as well. My husband is also my guiding light, don't know what I'd do without him. Very nicely worded.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014

Your warm review is very much appreciated. Thank you.

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Ah, seventeen syllables of
love whispered in words that
shine to light the way in
your travels through life.
Well done

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014

I love your thoughtful, gentle review. Thank you very much.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent tribute to and confirmation of your love for your husband, mystery writer.

Clever to incorporate modern day technology into a fun and romantic poem.

Good luck, Ted

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014

Thank you for your encouraging comments for my senryu.