Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Now that's a senryu! A haiku that address the human condition.

There's nothing quite as comforting, as a visit from old Aunt Flo, when you've been anxiously awaiting her appearance. LOL

Great Write!!! (definitely worthy of my vote)

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you so much lorraine for your great comments. Glad you liked this one! I didn't promote as I didn't think many would comment anyway - didn't do too badly in the booth though lol! Thank you for your vote :) Debs x

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

I never read your notes right away and still using Aunt
Flo as a real person works well too. But now that I've read your notes, this poem just reached hysterical.

good luck

lulube

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Hi lulube :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...

reply by Lulube on 18-Feb-2014

welcome

lulube

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

This poem is eccentric. The author's words are confusing but thanks for the author's notes it helped. The reader pondered on this poem. The artwork is cute and enhances the read.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Thank you harmony13 for taking the time to ponder over my attempt at a senryu. I appreciate your comments :) Kindest regards...

Comment from Dirus

Excellent

Hi there,

nice job on this one. All grammar looks good. Nice choice of words on this poem keep up the good work. Thank you for the good read. Also I liked the picture. :)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014

Thank you Dirus for your encouraging review. I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)