Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Flirty Gert"The clue is in the title!
15 total reviews
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your few words allowed portray that Gert was a flirt she would allow her breast to be squeezed but all else was out of bounds the images are written well
cheers smoothiecool
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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good luck in the contest
your few words allowed portray that Gert was a flirt she would allow her breast to be squeezed but all else was out of bounds the images are written well
cheers smoothiecool
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your great feedback, kindest regards, Debra :)
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Debra, welcome.SC
Comment from mfowler
What a tease! Your limerick speaks of the poor luck of a genuine fellow who loves to test women's bosoms for size only to be thwarted at the last point of testing by a super-structure of corsets. Funny stuff; well written and in good format. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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What a tease! Your limerick speaks of the poor luck of a genuine fellow who loves to test women's bosoms for size only to be thwarted at the last point of testing by a super-structure of corsets. Funny stuff; well written and in good format. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from MagKing
You have a fine way of talking naughty or should I say dirty?
What did Gert do to you to have made you write about her so?
She must have really offended you?
That you felt the best way was to forgive her by scribbling her past or still present in black and white?
Fine write!
Great piece!
Good luck in the contest!
MagKing
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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You have a fine way of talking naughty or should I say dirty?
What did Gert do to you to have made you write about her so?
She must have really offended you?
That you felt the best way was to forgive her by scribbling her past or still present in black and white?
Fine write!
Great piece!
Good luck in the contest!
MagKing
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from tfawcus
The last line of this is a killer! Nice balance of understated bawdiness with whimsical humour. This is a strong contender in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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The last line of this is a killer! Nice balance of understated bawdiness with whimsical humour. This is a strong contender in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you Tony for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Leineco
LOL - now that's the definition of a flirt!
tease 'em, please 'em
with the upper shelf goods
but never let 'em touch
what's under the hood!
Really cute. . .a naughtily funny!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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LOL - now that's the definition of a flirt!
tease 'em, please 'em
with the upper shelf goods
but never let 'em touch
what's under the hood!
Really cute. . .a naughtily funny!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you Lorraine for your great feedback, Cheers! Debra :)
Comment from Linda Engel
well designed matching art work with limerick. subject matter was fun and probably true to form back in the day.
Like the touch but cannot touch theme. nicely written.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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well designed matching art work with limerick. subject matter was fun and probably true to form back in the day.
Like the touch but cannot touch theme. nicely written.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you Linda for your great feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from RYME4U
This is very clever. I like it. It is just bawdy enough to befunny not dirty. The limerick style is done well and the presentation is very attractive. Good job!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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This is very clever. I like it. It is just bawdy enough to befunny not dirty. The limerick style is done well and the presentation is very attractive. Good job!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your wonderful feedback :) I appreciate it! Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written limerick poem. The message of this poem was clear. Good twist at the end of this limerick. The poem reads well, and was humorous. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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This was a well written limerick poem. The message of this poem was clear. Good twist at the end of this limerick. The poem reads well, and was humorous. Nice job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great limmerick for the contest. You have followed all of the rules for it. Good luck to you in the contest.
~teresa~
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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This is a great limmerick for the contest. You have followed all of the rules for it. Good luck to you in the contest.
~teresa~
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you teresa for your great feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both :) Kindest regards...
Comment from Ben Colder
One will need a blow torch for this night out. The photo makes the scene. The wording is good. I find no fault. Best to you in the contest. Shalom my friend.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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One will need a blow torch for this night out. The photo makes the scene. The wording is good. I find no fault. Best to you in the contest. Shalom my friend.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you Ben for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)