Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is a great poem--any child would enjoy. I think the variable rhyme scheme works well in this. An enjoyable and clever write. Take care, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014

Thanks Debbie for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

reminds me of peter pan and tinker bell, I love fairies and the we- folk for I am Irish, English and French-French canadian

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

I am so glad that you enjoyed this one, I love the fairy fantasy world. Your heritage is quite interesting. Thank you for the wonderful comments. :-) Carolyn

reply by country ranch writer on 01-Mar-2014

this the luck of the Irish

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,
I really love your little fairy. This writing is so clear that I could see in my minds eyes, the wee little creature flitting about. Tiny little wings fluttering
A beautiful writing.

BennyBeeharry

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thanks Bennie, I try to 'mix it up', children's, spiritual, general, etc. I am delighted you enjoyed this one, your comments always mean so much to me. :-) Carolyn

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Very beautiful writing on fairies a symbol of every little girl's fantasy. The poem rhymes very well and the rhythm has a steady and consistent flow.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thanks for this lovely review, I am happy you enjoyed the poem.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Sylvia Page

Exceptional

Carolyn this is so beautiful. Loved all the fairies, Some I've heard of but the Pee-Pee Fairy ? Not heard of that one. It's a good one to potty train little ones.
Cheers
Sylvia

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Hi Sylvia, this was a fun one to dream up. I hadn't heard of her either until she just popped into my head. Thanks for your lovely comments, I'm glad you liked the poem, Love, :-) Carolyn

Comment from darla1977

Excellent

This is a delightful children's piece! I really love the verse about the tooth fairy! Great rhyme, colorful, and fun to read! Nice job!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Thank you darla1977, I appreciate your kind remarks and I am happy you liked the poem, :-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I never heard of the Pee Pee Fairy. Does that really work to toilet train a child? Love the long stanza that describes where to find them. Next time I take a nature walk, I'll look. Oops, forgot you have to close your eyes. A wonderful children's poem.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

The pee-pee fairy was dreamed up along with the rest of the little poem. But who knows mommies may find her to be helpful. Thanks Shari, for this great review. :-) Carolyn

reply by Spitfire on 28-Feb-2014

C'mon. Everyone knows about the tooth fairy. Now, that's a kiddie con job. :-)

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

Well of course the tooth fairy is well known. There is a site on-line for kids, Faith picked a blond personal TF as her hair is the same color. :-)

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Totally charming...I especially enjoyed the Pee-Pee fairy...never heard of that one! I have always believed in my fairies! May they sprinkle a little magic on you tonight!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

The pee-pee fairy was just created with the writing of this poem. I am so glad you liked it. Thank you justjo, Carolyn

reply by Irish Rain on 28-Feb-2014

love that fairy, ha ha!...you are welcome!

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is a darling little poem about fairies. You're so good at writing all kinds of different poetry and they're always a joy to read.

I'll be posting something soon.

Kat

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Great Kat, I will be looking forward to reading your work. I have been missing you. Thanks for the great review and encouragement. Are you feeling well? I hope so, Love, Carolyn

reply by MizKat on 01-Mar-2014

I'm still coughing every few minutes. The only time I don't is when I'm sleeping. It seems like the whopping cough I had as a child.

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Actually, there have been several cases of whooping cough reported this year in our area. Take care of yourself. Coughing is so exhausting. Love you, Carolyn

reply by MizKat on 01-Mar-2014

I keep saying I'm going to go to the clinic, but haven't made it there yet. Yes, it is really exhausting to cough and blow. LOL So I sleep as much as I can.

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

My sister in Nashville, Tn has pneumonia, she 'finally' went to the Doctor.. Let me know when you get back from the clinic..(that means, get up and go)..Love you

reply by MizKat on 01-Mar-2014

I planned to make an appointment if my NP has an opening. I'll let you know the results. Thanks for caring, my friend.

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

And I do, very much :-)

reply by MizKat on 01-Mar-2014

Caring proves your true friend. Thanks!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is the cutest of all the poems I have read! Perfect for my grandchildren! This really creative and inspired work, flows with an ease and grace throughout its narrative! The rhyme is good! I just loved it! Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you Roy for this wonderful review. I would be honored if it was read to your grandchildren. :-) Carolyn