Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest
you tell the stories in so few words
the groom is a looser and as all are going to the wedding you will not be there
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014

thanks for the review

reply by Smoothiecool on 04-Mar-2014

most welcome...SC

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I LOVE THE PICTURE. I LOVE THE POEM. Sometimes your opinion is the wrong thing to give. You got your come-uppance. There are times you have to let others make their own mistakes. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014

thanks for the review,he's gone and I'm back as friend. hmm

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Just goes to show...a person in love just will not listen! Well done. The come-uppance is well defines and the presentation is very attractive.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014

thanks for the review true story

Comment from faithful_2

Excellent

It reminded me of someone who never showed up in the day of her wedding. She found out that her groom cheated on her and got another girl pregnant. Time, effort, love and money are all wasted.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014

thanks for the review

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is a creative response to that very challenging writing prompt. It is humorous but could also be sad if it caused an end to a friendship. I guess the rejected friend will learn to keep opinions to self. lol

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014

thanks for the review I am back in the fold hah