Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Early bird, indeed all birds are such beautiful creaturs,
that's a lovely 5/7/5/ pome,thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport,

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014

Thank you Lakeport for your lovely feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra

reply by lakeport on 16-Mar-2014

your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

I don't feel so good...
Woke up a bit too early
and caught all the worms.

LOL . . . a.k.a.
The early bird catches he worm -
the earlier bird catches all the worms!
(then waddles off to digest them)

Funny write :-)

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Hi lorraine, thanks for your great feedback and the lovely smile! x

Comment from Showboat

Excellent

HA! Piggery runs amok! Even birds do it, lol.

Very good, made me chuckle, and that's not easy to do with only sixteen words.

All the best in the contest,
Gayle

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Hi Gayle :) Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both and glad to share a chuckle with you! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

And that is one fat little birdy huh ! Nice job here ! Your ppic gels in so nicely with your words ! I got a good laught out of it !

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thank you of your great feedback, I appreciate it - glad to share a laugh with you! Kindest regards... :)

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

Bless his little heart...certainly looks a little 'stuffed '. I just love your contest entry here. The picture is very complimentary to your words.
I wish you luck in the contest - Dinah

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thank you Dinah for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The poem flows well. The author words are funny, creative and clear! The artwork is perfect and enhances the read.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thank you so much for your great comments! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Bayberry

Excellent

What a hoot! Your clever words explain that picture perfectly. Poor little guy. Gluttony is a terrible thing. LOL Best wishes in the contest for this super entry. Still smiling, Janet

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Hi Janet :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from annp

Excellent

great 5-7-5 contest entry

very funny and lighthearted
the picture say's it all

good luck in the competition

annp

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thank you annp for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very clever. I like the subtle humor in this and the fat bird picture is an excellent match for your words. I hope that you bird doesn't burp! ha ha!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Hi :) Thank you for your fun review! Glad you enjoyed the 575, kindest regards...:)

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

Your poem is funny as I look at your photo of a bird who couldn't fit another worm inside that plump tummy! Very imaginative & original. Thanks for sharing & good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thank you barley girl for your lovely comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)