Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the pie gone bad tour, lol. a pickle of a situation. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

I don't know if I would try that. That's too much pickle for me. LOL. Your poem reads well, and your 5-7-5 syllable count is good. Nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

pickle pie, I cannot begin to tell you how disgusting that sounds, but in an extremely humorous way LOL
excellent use of alliteration
and good 5/7/5 format :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Emma likes pickle I was rolling out pie crust we made pickle pie Nice recipe :) :) :) :) :) :) Best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I think the overwhelming response I had in reading this was: oh my, would I really have to eat that? And, the answer of course is yes, because Emma made it. Good fun response!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OMG, don't even want to think about it...pickle pie...so how did it taste...LOL...love your poem and a great picture...well written

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Emma likes pickles
I was rolling out pie crust
we made pickle pie

Yuck. LOL pickle pie? Hahahah a good one for those who like it. But, you gotta like it.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Weeellll...I didn't share that the pie was yucky....as in : the only person eating it was the pickle-lover. Thanks for understanding...LOL

reply by Gungalo on 14-Mar-2014

Smiling at you.

Comment from Patti R.

Excellent

The title caught my eye as I recently wrote a sonnet about the pickle lover in my house! I can't believe you actually made this!! What fun. Your 5-7-5 is perfectly structured and I wish you luck in this contest.

Patti

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Yep...we made it ! Thank God, this isn't a cooking show with critics....because the pie was ________really bad :-}

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Emma likes pickles
I was rolling out pie crust
we made pickle pie

Yuck, pickle pie sounds disgusting. At least the poem stood out. Probably better then the pie was....
John

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Oh, John...please let the poem be better...because the pie really s_______.( was bad...)
Thanks for writing!

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Well this is a good entry for the Humorous 5/7/5. I like pickle but not sure about pickle pie. Nice alliteration in pickle pie. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Believe me, there is a good reason for not being sure about pickle pie.... Ha