Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

No bones about it! This is a cleverly written 5/7/5 poem that's overflowing with humour. Very well constructed and matches the awesome picture.
Best wishes
Sylvia

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thanks, Sylvia. Now, where were you when I needed a vote, LOL? It lost miserably, I think it only got one or maybe two votes. I guess not as many voters care as much for cannibal humor as we do, huh?

Comment from Christof McTarnahan

Excellent

So, Deaner?
Yeah, 'Sak?
What did the cannibal do after he dumped his girlfriend?
I don't know.
HE WIPED HIS FUCKING ASS.
(the crowd sits in silence)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Hah! Yessir, he shore did. Then he picked his teeth with her piny bone, laughing hysterically, as only cannibals can do...

Wh-aaaaaaaaaa-ha-ha-ho-hoo!
:]

reply by Christof McTarnahan on 19-Mar-2014

you are the wind beneath my wings you greeeezy motherfukka

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

You too, 'Sak. You too.
;]

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Good

I can't read this so I didn't know how to rate it, it is just giving me a black screen, I don't know if it is just my computer or what. I even tried highlighting and it will only give me the title.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014

Huh, that's odd. You are the only person who has seemed to have that problem.

Oh well, you probably wouldn't have liked it anyway, sweet, LOL.

Thanks for trying. I'd rather you simply passed on it if you couldn't read it than to give me a "GOOD" review. After all, what are you rating as good?

reply by sweetwoodjax on 16-Mar-2014

i just did it so in case nobody let you know about it you could know there was a problem. I've seen it happen before.

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014

I checked all of my other reviews, and I rechecked the post itself several times after you told me that. It's showing up fine on my end. Since the contest is now over, I was able to ask about ten of my friend if they could read it, and none of them has experienced any problems. So, I wonder what is causing you not to be able to see it? It's a mystery, one I can't figure out.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

You are hilarious, Harold Dean ... in a grim, macabre way ... of course!

The author notes .. pity that someone or the other is jumping to take offense, always, isn't it?

Sonali (Reach - only to you!)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014

How'd you know it was me? It's supposed to be a blind-- well ...you know LOL.

Thanks for the (too kind) review, Reach!

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

This was a creative poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The poem reads well, and the message is clear. Very good complimentary picture. Nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014

Thank you for reading this silly thing, in777wr#. You're too kind.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. It's a dog eats dog world except when it comes to cannibalism. As you write, "No bones about it." Good luck with the contest. Yum! Les

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Hah, yes, it certainly is, Les!

Thanks for your kind comments of this crazy thing, ha ha ...

Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

I would imagine that no offense was taken by this clever play on words you submitted for the contest - the picture is one to remember and the presentation is indeed picture perfect - Dinah

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Thanks, Dinah, I appreciate that. One reviewer did take offense, that is why I added the note at the bottom. They were from Africa. It told them it was all meant in fun, and it is. They stated it may be construed "...in bad taste" BAD TASTE ...get it? But, they weren't joking, LOL. I wish I'd thought of that.

reply by ennahanid on 15-Mar-2014

How funny - not - and small-minded some folks can be. That 'bad taste' maybe you can use that somewhere else LOL

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Ha, ironically, I attempted to work it into this entry before the contest began, but I just couldn't do it in time. Believe me when I tell you this. I tried! (LOL)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very funny 5-7-5. This poem has fulfilled the conditions in this contest! I like the humour in this work! Well done, blessings,Roy.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Thanks you, Roy! I am pleased you liked this silly thing.

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

Hahaha...I genuinely blurted out laughter here, this was a super funny short one and there's no bones about that.
Well done, a perfectly written and executed feast and me thinks THIS pair of choppers is gonna eat up the competition...LOL
Cheers P

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Ha, thanks, (C), but that Frosty one showing his butt is pretty darn funny. Anyhow, I hope you're right!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like your alliterative title
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
Amusing play on words with "no bones about it" - it definitely made me laugh LOL I do love good gallows humor
Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Heh, well, gallows humor is my thing, Brooke. Of course, I don't have to tell you that, LOL.

Thanks very much for the too kind review of this silly thing.

reply by adewpearl on 15-Mar-2014

I'm up in the middle of the night for no good reason, so silly is just what I need :-)

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Me too!