Tennis Anyone?
Short Story-Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. Don't count on being the only one who hates the marriage. Your mate be thinking along the same lines you are. I think people with murder on their mind are causing their own punishment. Great work.
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I love the story. Don't count on being the only one who hates the marriage. Your mate be thinking along the same lines you are. I think people with murder on their mind are causing their own punishment. Great work.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
Comment from DonandVicki
Wow! This was a very funny,m in a very weird sense, yet the whole story made a lot of vengeance humor stand out so strongly. Don and Vicki
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Wow! This was a very funny,m in a very weird sense, yet the whole story made a lot of vengeance humor stand out so strongly. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from Leineco
LOL. . .good use of (?)vernacular - or whatever you call 'specialized' language :-)
While vaguely predictable (double spousal murder) - it was still entertaining :-) I had fun reading it!
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LOL. . .good use of (?)vernacular - or whatever you call 'specialized' language :-)
While vaguely predictable (double spousal murder) - it was still entertaining :-) I had fun reading it!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from Petriesan
this is wonderfully twisted in several facets and directions ( either that or the apple-brandy hath me twisted). No, it the writing. done isn a way that makes me envoius enough to tinker with someones brakes. . .
good piece
when the contest is over, let me know so I can fan you, please
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this is wonderfully twisted in several facets and directions ( either that or the apple-brandy hath me twisted). No, it the writing. done isn a way that makes me envoius enough to tinker with someones brakes. . .
good piece
when the contest is over, let me know so I can fan you, please
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Dude's gone whacko, that's for certain. Cutting break lines to do in his wife and tennis pro beau. But, I'm not entirely sure which one was crazier, the jilted guy in the torrid love triangle, or the gal.
In any event, it was an ... interesting story to say the least.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Dude's gone whacko, that's for certain. Cutting break lines to do in his wife and tennis pro beau. But, I'm not entirely sure which one was crazier, the jilted guy in the torrid love triangle, or the gal.
In any event, it was an ... interesting story to say the least.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi! Thank you so much. I've been waiting all day for a review!! Glad you found it interesting. AAA, so efficient!!
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My pleasure!
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