Young Love
2-10-2 Contest Entry7 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
Glad I read this a second time. I thought you missed the prompt. It was just the blue 'advertisement' over "divorce". I was married thirty-two years. I was in love, but people just change. But for the young, without children, I just see divorce as an inconvenience. Good luck!
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Glad I read this a second time. I thought you missed the prompt. It was just the blue 'advertisement' over "divorce". I was married thirty-two years. I was in love, but people just change. But for the young, without children, I just see divorce as an inconvenience. Good luck!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Sadly, this is so true in many marriages today. A couple must be completely dedicated and devoted to each other to survive a married life with all of the wicked distractions around us today.
Nicely done, and best of luck to you in the contest!
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Sadly, this is so true in many marriages today. A couple must be completely dedicated and devoted to each other to survive a married life with all of the wicked distractions around us today.
Nicely done, and best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from daniela.albu
You managed to say much in few words. The poem is ballanced and the artwork fully complements its words. You expressed a fact of life but the poem has a sensitivity of its own.
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You managed to say much in few words. The poem is ballanced and the artwork fully complements its words. You expressed a fact of life but the poem has a sensitivity of its own.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from judester
Good one. Just hold on to see if it is solid and fulfilling.You will know soon enough. I imagine that there are many brides and grooms at the alter, suddenly realizing they are not so sure,second thoughts, but they figure that it is too late to back out. Repent in leisure, hah. Judester
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Good one. Just hold on to see if it is solid and fulfilling.You will know soon enough. I imagine that there are many brides and grooms at the alter, suddenly realizing they are not so sure,second thoughts, but they figure that it is too late to back out. Repent in leisure, hah. Judester
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
This is a senryu in form and content. Flows well considering the restrictive format. So true and showing great depth in the careful word choices. Picture does enhance but the words are clarity plus. NG
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This is a senryu in form and content. Flows well considering the restrictive format. So true and showing great depth in the careful word choices. Picture does enhance but the words are clarity plus. NG
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from LoannaLois
This is so powerful, yet so sad. I love the words you used and the picture was powerful, too. The sentiment behind your words is poignant.
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This is so powerful, yet so sad. I love the words you used and the picture was powerful, too. The sentiment behind your words is poignant.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
Comment from donette1914
very powerful message of young love and the divorce rate is high and a lot of times have children. well done it was a pleasure to read
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very powerful message of young love and the divorce rate is high and a lot of times have children. well done it was a pleasure to read
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014