Love
How would you define it?16 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
love is a many splendid thing and we will always see the beauty in love for one and all. The words and picture really a saying it all look how happy they are
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love is a many splendid thing and we will always see the beauty in love for one and all. The words and picture really a saying it all look how happy they are
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
Comment from Twilightspire
Such a nice poem. I liked the style that this was written in, an even, rhythmic tone. The message was beautiful and timeless, especially the last line. Well written and such a great message. Great job with this poem and good luck in the contest.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Such a nice poem. I liked the style that this was written in, an even, rhythmic tone. The message was beautiful and timeless, especially the last line. Well written and such a great message. Great job with this poem and good luck in the contest.
-T.J.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much. I wrote this one for my wife and she said I should enter it. I modified a bit to fit the contest rules.
Comment from michaelcahill
Hi. Beautiful job here. Conforms to the rules in every way and also to the spirit of the clarity poem as I understand it. This I wouldn't mind losing to. I don't want to make a big deal out of it, but are you aware that we are losing in a landslide to a piece that isn't even close to being a clarity poem? Just wanted to whine somewhere. Hahaha. Loved your entry. Very nice. mikey
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Hi. Beautiful job here. Conforms to the rules in every way and also to the spirit of the clarity poem as I understand it. This I wouldn't mind losing to. I don't want to make a big deal out of it, but are you aware that we are losing in a landslide to a piece that isn't even close to being a clarity poem? Just wanted to whine somewhere. Hahaha. Loved your entry. Very nice. mikey
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from barleygirl
Altho I can admire your lovely expressions of love, I have to disagree . . . this, to me, is mostly outer stuff . . . I'd like to see more inner stuff, too. Love isn't always fluffy meringue. But sometimes people enjoy a lighthearted poem & that is the gift you've given us. Thanks for sharing.
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Altho I can admire your lovely expressions of love, I have to disagree . . . this, to me, is mostly outer stuff . . . I'd like to see more inner stuff, too. Love isn't always fluffy meringue. But sometimes people enjoy a lighthearted poem & that is the gift you've given us. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from Fillmore Paige
Endless works have used terms such as "trembling"; "passion"; "consumes";"perfect" "beautiful"...; what's different here from the standard, industrial strength bodice ripper??
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Endless works have used terms such as "trembling"; "passion"; "consumes";"perfect" "beautiful"...; what's different here from the standard, industrial strength bodice ripper??
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, You've penned a Clarity poem, indeed, and a very beautiful one too, especially:
"Passion that consumes my soul ... "
(Beauty and love)
Author, when love is found, a new self is truly born.
Well written. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
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Hello author, You've penned a Clarity poem, indeed, and a very beautiful one too, especially:
"Passion that consumes my soul ... "
(Beauty and love)
Author, when love is found, a new self is truly born.
Well written. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from Prezze
It goes by the law of a Clarity Poem which is done in a clear and co-ordinate manner. I love the way precise words are used to captivate the interest and romantic-edge of the poem.
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It goes by the law of a Clarity Poem which is done in a clear and co-ordinate manner. I love the way precise words are used to captivate the interest and romantic-edge of the poem.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from victor 66
I've never written a A Clarity Pyramid poem using seven 7 lines. Fascinating format. I think writing poetry about love is always good. It is sincere and expresses an appreciation of what life is about. Good job.
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I've never written a A Clarity Pyramid poem using seven 7 lines. Fascinating format. I think writing poetry about love is always good. It is sincere and expresses an appreciation of what life is about. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from Ramona Hughes
I enjoyed this pretty poem. The words choices are poignant and evocative. I like the fifth line especially well...excellent work. The form is interesting and new to me. I think you did a great job here.
Ramona Hughes
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I enjoyed this pretty poem. The words choices are poignant and evocative. I like the fifth line especially well...excellent work. The form is interesting and new to me. I think you did a great job here.
Ramona Hughes
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your penned words of love allow the reader to see and feel this
good alliteration in
holding, hands
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
your penned words of love allow the reader to see and feel this
good alliteration in
holding, hands
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014