Comment from maggieadams

Excellent

This is a cute well-rhymed poem with its aabb rhyme scheme. We are all mammals and hair is part of the species description. Pain is part of being female.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you for your great feedback, kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah, well, she (Dave) could always join the circus, too. There's a lot to be said for circus and/or carny work. You get to travel extensively, see many parts of the country, meet new, interesting and exciting people, and the pay ain't half bad, either.

Or, she could do just like you said and quit shaving, then change her name to Dave.

Funny stuff, and I loved the old, vintage look this had.

Well done!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Hi dean, thank you for your fabulous feedback! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 26-Apr-2014

Yep.

Comment from Ireanb

Excellent

Hahaha man I am feeling ya in this one! What a pain it is to be a woman. Love this! Good luck in the contes, also you picked an excellent photo t go perfectly with the poem. Very upbeat and funny

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Hi :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

This poem has a good rhyme and rhythm. It's premise is amusing and you deliver all of the gags with good timing and a sense of fun. It grows well with the theme and should amuse a lot of voters. I wish you well in teh contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Hi :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Seems waxing's not much better than a shave;
it hurts like hell and I'm not all that brave.
The stubble's peeping through already too...
I'll change my name to Dave, that's what I'll do!

this is a very well written poem and a great entry into the growth contest. It rhymes well in aabb style, and it has great humor to it.
good luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you Mary for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

Ha, ha, love the solution of changing your name, that sure seems like the easiest solution. Well written, flows well, and left me chuckling. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you Karen for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is indeed about "growth". Very cleverly done.The rhythm and rhyming are good and the presentation is good. I like the original solution you came up with,Dave. Ha Ha

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Hi :) thank you for your great feedback. Glad you enjoyed the humour. Kindest regards, Dave (spoken in my deepest gruffest voice!) ;)

Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

This is a very humorous write. Yet very true with some women. Waxing and shaving can be a hassel. Then I ask God why he put that feature in some women and he won't answer. Maybe His answer is Change your nam to Dave. LOL We'll never know. Thanks for sharing this humor with us.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thank you angel Debbie for your lovely feedback. My way of dealing with the excess testosterone is to joke about it, laugh or cry right?! I choose to smile even though I get self conscious about the stubble :) kindest regards...

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I'm sure this isn't really true, 'D' (not 'Dave' LOL).

Hey, I'm jealous, as I wish I could grow a beard like her in the picture.

Very funny read about this poor hairy lady who seems to have found a solution. Maybe she could audition for a werewolf movie.

Good luck and best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Hi Ted :) Thank you for your fun response... maybe that's a lucrative career move for me?! LOL! Thanks for your good luck wishes. Kindest regards as always...;)

Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

Great photo to go with your poem. Very humorous and picturesque, great description. Clever and fun. Love that last line. Interesting idea to use the topic of "growth" this way. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Hi ragamuffin :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Glad you enjoyed my entry :) Kindest regards...