Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah ha, sad, but true, nonetheless! It's funny how it always seems to work out that way, isn't it? Like comedian Jeff Foxworthy says, "Men only want two things...a cold beer, and to see something neked"

Well done, and you can't more opposing when it comes to view points than this!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014

Thank you Dean for your great feedback :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 28-Apr-2014

My pleasure!

:>)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

Unfortunately, what you state in this poem is the situation with many young couples. The entry meets the criteria of the prompt. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014

Thank you Jeanie for your kind feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both :)

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a sedoka, with a difference, having the female voice in pink and the Man in blue. It is a fun poem.

Good luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014

Hi Mary, thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. He's got that urge, but marriage is a big price to pay for it. Infatuation will turn logic into Silly Putty. The joke is on him. Well done! Les

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014

Hi Les, thanks for your great feedback, I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Ricky1024

Good

Interesting and to the point as asll Human Kind need love and wanting.
Good imergy. Adjective contentr in need of a few adjectives, otherwise great.
Thanks, 24.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014

Thanks for your comments, glad you enjoyed the sedoka. Hard to put in lots of adjectives with the syllable count restrictions for the sedoka format, but I hear you! Kindest regards...:)