Finding Home
Home Contest Submission6 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Idamarty, this poem is well rhymed with a terrific a-a-b-b scheme in each quatrain. Strong spiritual message elicits a connection for me to God's amazing love and His truth. Well done! All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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Idamarty, this poem is well rhymed with a terrific a-a-b-b scheme in each quatrain. Strong spiritual message elicits a connection for me to God's amazing love and His truth. Well done! All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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Hi GracieAnn,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewint...so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :) thank you for entering the contest. I enjoyed your entry. Perfect rhythm and solid aabb rhyme scheme. I also enjoyed your subtle use of alliteration throughout. Nice theme, I can tell this poem came straight from your heart, it was a lovely heartfelt read. Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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Hello :) thank you for entering the contest. I enjoyed your entry. Perfect rhythm and solid aabb rhyme scheme. I also enjoyed your subtle use of alliteration throughout. Nice theme, I can tell this poem came straight from your heart, it was a lovely heartfelt read. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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Hi Debra,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel that no matter where and what life has thrown at you God will always be there to call you home and you to call his your home be spirit filled and safe in his peace
cheers Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel that no matter where and what life has thrown at you God will always be there to call you home and you to call his your home be spirit filled and safe in his peace
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 04-May-2014
Comment from DALLAS01
liked your take on where home is. This had a great rhythm and flow and the art work is outstanding.
I`ve walked beside you all this time,
Carried you when you couldn`t climb.
I`ve watched decisions you have made,
And listened when you stopped and prayed.``
I especially like the third line..I am sure he is often amused at how we use our self will.
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liked your take on where home is. This had a great rhythm and flow and the art work is outstanding.
I`ve walked beside you all this time,
Carried you when you couldn`t climb.
I`ve watched decisions you have made,
And listened when you stopped and prayed.``
I especially like the third line..I am sure he is often amused at how we use our self will.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
Comment from lancellot
For some this is home. And it makes sense when home is more than a physical place, but even if it were, isn't all the world the Lords home and we just live in it. Well done.
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For some this is home. And it makes sense when home is more than a physical place, but even if it were, isn't all the world the Lords home and we just live in it. Well done.
Comment Written 03-May-2014
Comment from zanya
Touched by God's love and mercy in a meaningful way has to be a truly remarkable and lasting experience 'Knew life would never be the same'
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Touched by God's love and mercy in a meaningful way has to be a truly remarkable and lasting experience 'Knew life would never be the same'
Comment Written 03-May-2014