Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. It flows well and thank you for providing your author notes. Your artwork choice went well with your poem.

angel123

 Comment Written 24-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Thank you for your great comments, kindest regards... :)

Comment from JavaJunkie

Excellent

Oh dear...this contest is going to be close...this is hilarious and made me laugh out loud. I love the picture ...I think it adds to your punny poem!
Good luck I'm the contest.

 Comment Written 24-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Thank you so much javajunkie for your kind and encouraging review. Glad you enjoyed this bit of fun :) kindest regards...:)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Adorable artwork for this poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count for the contest
Great use of consonant hard C sounds in all three lines
fun play on words with "prick" in its literal and figurative meanings LOL
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 24-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Thank you Brooke for your great feedback :) kindest regards as always...

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. Hedgehogs look cute but not cuddly. The poem is right. They are pricks. Hedgehogs are cute enough to get them in the door. Their spines keep from kicking the out the door. Great work.

 Comment Written 24-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Thank you Ellie for your great feedback :) kindest regards as always...

Comment from Novice2012

Excellent

I thinks its clever...but I don't like the prick. I actually looked for another word to replace it...but your right...that's the nicest word you could use for a bad boss. Keep it like it is.

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Hi, thanks for your thoughtful feedback. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

New name for Kevin the King Pin..........................mr Prickles .........
I think he must live on the h-edge......or wait for it ...high on the hog!!!!
I like hedge hogs they are so cute...we d leave milk and bread out for them....good luck
God bless

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Thank you for your fun feedback and good luck wishes jenny :) kindest regards as always...

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

how funny is this? so adorable and so cleaver the king pin but he's such a prick, outstanding and witty and i love it well done it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Thank you so much Donette for your kind and encouraging review. I appreciate it! Kindest regards as always...:)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

So we have a genuine 5/7/5 and a cute picture of a hedge hog. What you gonna do? Say five stars and let the little prick alone.

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

That'll do me LIJ Red! Thank you for the stars and nice comments. I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I think most 'king-pins' are pricks, smothered in their own self-importance, and lacking in feelings or compassion for their 'lessers', so I think your double-meaning is spot on.

Good luck and best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Hi Ted :) Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. Much appreciated!