Comment from AprilShower

Exceptional

There's a lot of suspense this chapter, Bev. It's kind of scary, but I'm anxious to read more. This has kept my attention all the way through. It's well written.

If you wonder why I haven't been around for a while. We've had health problems here at our house. I've spent much time with my husband at hospitals and doctors' offices. I don't know how long it will take for life to get back to normal. I keep praying that it will.

April

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

April, I'm very sorry to hear that you've had so much to deal with recently. That can drain, not only energy, but finances. I will add you to my prayer list, if you don't mind, that you find your way moving back into the light. I did wonder where you'd gone.

Thanks for taking time out today to read my chapters, April. I appreciate the encouragement and great generosity.

:) Bev

reply by AprilShower on 31-Aug-2014

Prayers always help, Bev. Thank you.

You have a very exciting story.

April :o)

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

You're welcome, April. And thanks for your compliment. :) Bev

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Great as always. I'm way behind, I haven't been on the site in a long time. My online shop keeps me busy, but I had to catch up on your book. It's getting very exciting! =}

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014

Thank you so much, Roxanna. I appreciate your generosity and encouragement. Hugs, Bev

Comment from Hareem.S

Excellent

This is a very nice chapter. Although I have not read the rest of the book this chapter kept me hooked till the end. Very vivid details with good dialogues.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thank you so much, Hareem. I appreciate you taking time to read and review! :) Bev

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

Moving right along. Where are Jana and Father Brian. These last two chapters have succeeded in whetting the readers appetite. The statement concerning the boy who committed suicide, living with his boyfriend; is that going to lead into any kind of a revelation about how the tribe or family may have felt about that. Are there lingering feelings of guilt among them concerning a possible attitude? Or am I way off base?

 Comment Written 29-May-2014

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reply by the author on 29-May-2014

Thanks for your review, Dallas. The situation with Billy has been a integral part of this story all along - mostly on the perimeter. The next chapter will answer your first question.

I appreciate you taking time to read the chapter :)

reply by DALLAS01 on 29-May-2014

:.)

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi No six left, a pity i am sorry. I enjoyed the tension in this, not too much, but just enough to keep reading...and I like the small details. A devil dog huh, well were will it take us...

 Comment Written 29-May-2014

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reply by the author on 29-May-2014

Hi, Padumachitta. Thank you so much for this gracious and generous review! Your words of encouragement are worth more than any star. Warm regards, Bev

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Writingfundimension: I have not read the previous parts of this book. However, from what I have read here, this is a really exciting, original, grab my attention kind of story. It is six star worthy but I'm out so virtual only today. Keep up the good work! livelylinda

 Comment Written 28-May-2014

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reply by the author on 28-May-2014

Thanks so much, LL, for your very gracious and generous review! I'm very encouraged by your kind remarks. And much appreciate your consideration of a six. Coming from such a good writer as yourself, that means a lot to me. Warm regards, Bev

Comment from JW

Excellent

This chapter is a good continuation of your story. While nothing major happens, it's a good what I call transitional chapter.

No spags found. Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 28-May-2014

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reply by the author on 28-May-2014

Thanks so much, Jonathon! :)

Comment from jjstar

Exceptional

The sense of urgency and the OMG moment on Ty's part was just perfect. I have, once again, run out of ways to praise your writing. I hate sounding like a broken record, but just excellent!

"Death has been in the wind for a week now," she said. "I've smelled it, I've heard its wails. Un woawanglake!"---perfect!!!

Jake get out to that cabin===hate to be a nitpicker...hehehe..Jake, (I know it's just a sleepy-eyed omission..lol)

 Comment Written 28-May-2014

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reply by the author on 28-May-2014

Thank you so very much, JJ. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. And thank you also very your generosity and encouragement.

Your sharp editorial eye is welcome, too!

Hugs, Bev

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Jake will do well to listen to the advice and stay put in the car. That animal with the painted face sounds very dangerous. This is another excellent chapter that is very well written with a nice flow and good strong dialogue. Good job.

 Comment Written 28-May-2014

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reply by the author on 28-May-2014

Thank you so much, CR. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! :) Bev

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Good chapter, Bev, a nice lead into more action and suspense ready to be unleashed.
Good writers have a way of using the periphery without directly drawing away from the main focus. Great dialogue from scene to scene, person to person, topic to topic, but never leading off too much in one direction. You keep the balance well.
Great write.
Warming up nicely for another onslaught.
Best wishes,
have a great day,
RG

 Comment Written 28-May-2014

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reply by the author on 28-May-2014

Thank you so much, RG. I really appreciate this helpful and most encouraging review. As always, your support and generosity mean a lot to me! Warm regards, Bev

reply by RGstar on 28-May-2014

You are welcome, Bev

reply by the author on 28-May-2014

:))