Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "A Simple Awakening"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
24 total reviews
Comment from 1954speed
Very well written piece with strong message. Repeating the lines has a strong positive effect on your work. It flowed well and was well executed. Very good. Later, Jim
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Very well written piece with strong message. Repeating the lines has a strong positive effect on your work. It flowed well and was well executed. Very good. Later, Jim
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent job with the triolet form. Strong rhymes in the correct order and excellent choice of repeating lines
An uplifting message that ends with a sense of great joy. Perfect picture to enhance the theme.
Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent job with the triolet form. Strong rhymes in the correct order and excellent choice of repeating lines
An uplifting message that ends with a sense of great joy. Perfect picture to enhance the theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
Comment from Green Lake Girl
How I wish everyone bought into your line, "Embracing hatred will no longer stand." What a great world it would be. Very nice job with this poem and contest.
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How I wish everyone bought into your line, "Embracing hatred will no longer stand." What a great world it would be. Very nice job with this poem and contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
Comment from rouskin
Embracing hatred will no longer stand for love has come to live within our hearts ... Perfectly written piece It should win the contest Had I six they would be yours
Outstanding work
Blessings, Rouskin
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Embracing hatred will no longer stand for love has come to live within our hearts ... Perfectly written piece It should win the contest Had I six they would be yours
Outstanding work
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is an interesting style of poetry and one that's new to me. The love ending hate is the prayer and purpose to all who want peace. This tributes that goal
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This is an interesting style of poetry and one that's new to me. The love ending hate is the prayer and purpose to all who want peace. This tributes that goal
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Five stars for using my favorite technique - repetition! You seem to have this locked up. Very well written. Good form....Keep it going!
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Five stars for using my favorite technique - repetition! You seem to have this locked up. Very well written. Good form....Keep it going!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
Comment from l.raven
Hey you, I have tried this form before...and gave up...hummmm...very hard one to do...but you nailed it Michael...and with a wonderful poem... love has come to live within our hearts... and a beautiful work of art...bravo!!! Luff Linda xxoo love
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Hey you, I have tried this form before...and gave up...hummmm...very hard one to do...but you nailed it Michael...and with a wonderful poem... love has come to live within our hearts... and a beautiful work of art...bravo!!! Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
Comment from Sasha
This is a superbly written, deeply moving, and a powerful poem with a strong and important message. I love the repetition and excellent rhyme. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
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This is a superbly written, deeply moving, and a powerful poem with a strong and important message. I love the repetition and excellent rhyme. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
Good message in this poem. Love covers a multitude of mistakes. This is well written. I find no fault. Bestof luck in the contest.
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Good message in this poem. Love covers a multitude of mistakes. This is well written. I find no fault. Bestof luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully written Triolet and a more than worthy contest entry. It was a pleasure to read as the message is resoundingly clear and filled with a passionate call to action. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This is a beautifully written Triolet and a more than worthy contest entry. It was a pleasure to read as the message is resoundingly clear and filled with a passionate call to action. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014