Comment from mjac777

Excellent

You wrote: "Knowing you journey is completed, you're home. "( you should be your)

But otherwise a good capture of a feeling of releif when returning home to safety after staring death in the face.

I can just imaging how amazing it must have felt to be in a life threatening situation and come out the other end alive. And to see the "cliffs of Dover" must have been amazingly wonderful.
Good job expressing this.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014

Thank you

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I often think how hard it must be on these men/women in the forces, who have spent so long away from home, to settle back into family life. So many suffer from wounds that don't show.

Knowing you (YOUR) journey is completed,

Margaret

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014

thank you Margaret

Comment from poetbear

Excellent

We plan on visiting there but Thanks for reminding me.
There is something very soecial about your writing.
Others will find it as well.
I hope you are published somewhere.
You are very talented and profound.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014

thank you

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

There no place like home or Friendly territory when returning from war. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014

Comment from LadyGabrielle

Good

Your poem has a great sentiment. But your last line should be you're home and not your home. I like the photo you used to represent your poem. Nice!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2014