Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

This is one cute bunny and one sad farmer. I love the illustration that is perfect for this wonderful, lighthearted lune. The bunny looks like he's eyeing the largest carrot he can.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

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Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

your few words allow the reader to se and feel that once the rabbit has eaten the carrot a hole remains

good visual

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014

Thank you

reply by Smoothiecool on 22-Jun-2014

welcome..SC

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is a well written Lune. The description of the rabbit is clear and the artwork enhances your words. You have done a good job with this poem

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

I've placed garden net over my plot. Not to worry I toss out left overs for the critters. They don't have to dig or even beg. Best wishes with your entry -- and garden.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This "lune" meets the form and syllable requirements given in the contest rules. (Typo alert: "rabbits" should have an apostrophe: RABBIT'S.) Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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Comment from kiwisteveh

Good

Nice idea for a lune but this one didn't quite do it for me. You had to squeeze too much I think, giving us 'veg' and not being clear whether the hole was in the ground or the fence.

rabbit's needs an apostrophe.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014

Thank you