Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "That Grin"The clue is in the title!
21 total reviews
Comment from Patti R.
Oh ho! Just look at the twinkle in those big eyes! What an adorable child, Debra. My 14 yr old is Rebecca!! Cool coincidence.
I haven't heard of a Codary before, and I wish I'd seen the prompt! You appear to have written a perfect example. Thanks for sharing the cute kid pic, too.
Patti
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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Oh ho! Just look at the twinkle in those big eyes! What an adorable child, Debra. My 14 yr old is Rebecca!! Cool coincidence.
I haven't heard of a Codary before, and I wish I'd seen the prompt! You appear to have written a perfect example. Thanks for sharing the cute kid pic, too.
Patti
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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Ah thanks Patti :)
Glad you enjoyed this one - my Rebecca is being a complete chuff today... how's yours?!
Love Debs x
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My Rebecca had a job babysitting today, two toddlers, she's exhausted!!
But when she was your R.'s age, she was a little chuffer, too! But oh so cute ...
Comment from Caressa_08
A great picture here, Debra, & too, your talent showing with this true life poem that your "sometimes" mischievous 3 year old has got you where she wants....Though, with that grin, I guess only her Mum can detect that.
Caressa
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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A great picture here, Debra, & too, your talent showing with this true life poem that your "sometimes" mischievous 3 year old has got you where she wants....Though, with that grin, I guess only her Mum can detect that.
Caressa
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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Thanks Caressa for your lovely feedback.
Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That's brilliant, Debra, you have that down perfectly, I checked! LOL, I have never heard of a codary, so took a good look at the rules. Apart from that, it is a sweet, lovely, put a smile on your face, poem, and I hope you win! She is lovely!! xsx sandra
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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That's brilliant, Debra, you have that down perfectly, I checked! LOL, I have never heard of a codary, so took a good look at the rules. Apart from that, it is a sweet, lovely, put a smile on your face, poem, and I hope you win! She is lovely!! xsx sandra
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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Hi Sandra, Thank you for your lovely feedback. I didn't win, but I didn't expect to - the best entry did win though, so that's good :)
Lots of love, hope you are well xx
Comment from J. Dark
This is simply adorable, Debra, and I was impressed with how you tackled this format - it is not one I am familiar with or have come across before, but you seem to have worked it beautifully. Wonderful photograph - your daughter is incredibly cute despite her built in three year old terror!
Kindest of regards,
Julie :-) xx
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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This is simply adorable, Debra, and I was impressed with how you tackled this format - it is not one I am familiar with or have come across before, but you seem to have worked it beautifully. Wonderful photograph - your daughter is incredibly cute despite her built in three year old terror!
Kindest of regards,
Julie :-) xx
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
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Hi Julie :) Thank you so much for this lovely review and six star award! Glad you enjoyed the poem... please let me know if you fancy a lodger any time - either Rebecca or me (I'm less trouble!)
Love Debs x
Comment from misscookie
what a pretty lass she is.
I love the words to your poem your words are so true.
there is something about their smile that takes control of you.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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what a pretty lass she is.
I love the words to your poem your words are so true.
there is something about their smile that takes control of you.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Thank you miss cookie for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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You're very welcome.Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Petriesan
Interesting form. But more than the rules, I like the spey you told. I can see my granddaughter in your words, tempting Mr to play with that grin like she knows she is being cute... Does she? Nice piece
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Interesting form. But more than the rules, I like the spey you told. I can see my granddaughter in your words, tempting Mr to play with that grin like she knows she is being cute... Does she? Nice piece
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Thanks Petriesan - I think they all know how to play us when they choose to!
Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment from livelylinda
Debra: Oh, I can see the devil in her eyes. They say quite loudly, "I may be cute but watch out cause I'm in control". Your CODARY poem seems to be mechanically correct and a delight to read. livelylinda
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Debra: Oh, I can see the devil in her eyes. They say quite loudly, "I may be cute but watch out cause I'm in control". Your CODARY poem seems to be mechanically correct and a delight to read. livelylinda
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Hi livelylinda :) Thank you for your great feedback - I'm glad you enjoyed the codary :) Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Capricorn30
A lovely girl--she's pretty, Debra;
A well-crafted codary, dedicated to a child, who like all children are able to deceive, in a fun fashion.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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A lovely girl--she's pretty, Debra;
A well-crafted codary, dedicated to a child, who like all children are able to deceive, in a fun fashion.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you Capricorn30 for your lovely feedback :) Kindest regards as always, Debra
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. You have a cute daughter. I know what you are talking about. My children looked their most innocent when they were up to no good. Great work.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. You have a cute daughter. I know what you are talking about. My children looked their most innocent when they were up to no good. Great work.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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LOL - funny how they can switch on the charm when they need to! Thanks for your lovely feedback Ellie... Kindest regards as always, Debra x
Comment from Lulube
great entry poem. What as grin indeed. got you wrapped around her little finger eh? Difficult style but you have filled the lines in an easy fashion.
good luck in the contest
lulube
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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great entry poem. What as grin indeed. got you wrapped around her little finger eh? Difficult style but you have filled the lines in an easy fashion.
good luck in the contest
lulube
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Hi Lulube :) Thank you so much for your great feedback, good luck wishes and 6th star! I truly appreciate it... She thinks she has me round her finger - but I'm on to her LOL! Damn though, that smile can melt the coldest heart! Love Debs x
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and the little flutter of the eye lashes don't help either. lol
welcome Debra
lulube