Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

The title makes me think someone lied to get sex. The person who lied thought it was well worth it. The person who believed the lies is not happy. It will take her a long time to gain trust in anybody. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2014

Comment from Annelisa

Good

I have read this several times and I just don't understand what is being said. I don't know if the middle line is throwing me off but I think I get this gist of the poem from the title. I feel like something is missing.

As for the contest, all rules were followed and I wish you luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

You lied

Forever...smile

Not me.
There seems to be some undertones in these words.
Fulfilled the requirements of the prompt having the perfect 2-4-2 syllable count

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"You lied
Forever...smile
Not me."
bad break-up? found out that all are lies. is the title supposed to be "an easy lay" as in "an easy fuck"?
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest"
rebekka x

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

I saw this prompt, it was not an easy one. I like the subject you chose and it is dot on syllable count. Best wishes for the prompt.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014