Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Believe"The clue is in the title!
14 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. You can do if you think you can. Being positive makes you feel better. Even your health improves. Relations with others are better. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. You can do if you think you can. Being positive makes you feel better. Even your health improves. Relations with others are better. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thank you Ellie for your great feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards as always,,, :)
Comment from Judy Couch
Excellent statement and so true. I like your poem because it says something meaningful and isn't just words taking up space on the page.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Excellent statement and so true. I like your poem because it says something meaningful and isn't just words taking up space on the page.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you Judy for your lovely feedback. Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned poem, positive attitudes so imperative in all aspects of life;
So simple to believe when we wish to achieve our goals.
A pleasure to read a small poem with great inspiration.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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A well-penned poem, positive attitudes so imperative in all aspects of life;
So simple to believe when we wish to achieve our goals.
A pleasure to read a small poem with great inspiration.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much Capricorn for your great feedback :) Kind regards, Debra
Comment from sgalletti
I believe in this message as well. I've taken years of courses on Quantum Think and highly recommend the book by Dianne Collins. It's an award winner and is inspiring. Best of luck in this contest. Sue
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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I believe in this message as well. I've taken years of courses on Quantum Think and highly recommend the book by Dianne Collins. It's an award winner and is inspiring. Best of luck in this contest. Sue
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you Sue for your great feedback :) Kind regards, Debra
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 2/4/2 syllable count for the contest
excellent use of enjambment to make this one continuous observation, and your statement is most inspirational and motivational :-) This could be a poster
Brooke
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Your poem is in excellent 2/4/2 syllable count for the contest
excellent use of enjambment to make this one continuous observation, and your statement is most inspirational and motivational :-) This could be a poster
Brooke
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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LOL! Thanks Brooke :) Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your few words allow the reader to see and feel if your will is strong enough you can do anything
flows well
cheers..smoothiecool
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your few words allow the reader to see and feel if your will is strong enough you can do anything
flows well
cheers..smoothiecool
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you Smoothicool for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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most welcome...SC >>Faye
Comment from Annelisa
Absolutely true! I tell my kids this all the time. Do they listen? Hopefully! Its difficult to write a poem with such strict restraints but you penned a nice inspiring entry for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Absolutely true! I tell my kids this all the time. Do they listen? Hopefully! Its difficult to write a poem with such strict restraints but you penned a nice inspiring entry for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Hi Annelisa, thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes :) Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from Donna McNaughton
There is a great message in this short, but sweet poem. I like the image you selected for it. Positive thinking generates a warmth that radiates outward towards others, just like your poem. Good job.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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There is a great message in this short, but sweet poem. I like the image you selected for it. Positive thinking generates a warmth that radiates outward towards others, just like your poem. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Hi Donna, thank you for your great feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra
Comment from zanya
And so we are being told increasingly that belief and our thoughts are what creates our reality - and are vital to our wellbeing
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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And so we are being told increasingly that belief and our thoughts are what creates our reality - and are vital to our wellbeing
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you zanya for your feedback :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
It is great logic and have it on a poster in my office (Denis Waitley). I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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It is great logic and have it on a poster in my office (Denis Waitley). I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you Mystic Angel for your great feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards, Debra :)