Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

Such a question to ponder for a little man. You chose a perfect piece of art to accompany. Grammar and punctuation are perfect. Good 50 word story.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014

Hello Stranger! How are you? You've been gone some time.... lovely to see you back :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra x

Comment from dennis0530

Excellent

I'm not sure if father knows. Maybe he has the same question in mind but is afraid to voice out.

The only difference is when father's winkie is boned, he takes every opportunity to "de-bone" it.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014

lol lol lol! And 'ain't that the truth!
Thank you for your fun feedback and the stars:)
Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

I can see why you this won, Debra..Congratulations on this win, & quite an accomplishment in using so little words to make us giggle ...As, the late Art Linkletter, American icon, TV Host of decades ago, always had a segment on his program, & think it was called, Kids Say the Darndest Things...I couldn't help think of this, your poem & how Robbie was asking & wondering about that special part of his anatomy.

Caressa

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014

Hi Caressa :) kids certainly do say the funniest things and ask the funniest questions... I am often at a loss of what to say! Thank you for your great feedback, love Debra :) x

Comment from BlueFlag

Excellent

cute funny and a delight
very funny
good work
worthy of my 5 star review
good luck in the contest
I have to see others

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014

Thank you so much BlueFlag for your great review and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

At first I thought a winkie was a chocolate bar or something, so a bone in it would be inconvenient. Then, the penny dropped and my mind went elsewhere and I laughed. That's what you meant me to do, wasn't it? Great use of fifty words.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014

Thank you so much mfowler for your funny feedback - glad you laughed! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your story. Great job with your 50 word story. I like the flow of it. Kids ask the funniest things, great job. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014

Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This a classical instance of mum hand ball balling a problem to dad, I loved this simple yet clever short story, perceptive and engaging! A good entry in this 50 word contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Roy for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

I would surmise this is a true happening? Even if not, this is really funny, and a question that is asked many times over.

I raised two boys, so been there, done that!

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Jax for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Yep, true story - 'Robbie' aka my son! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the story. I would give the same answer you did. Go ask your Father. How do you make the answer simple enough for a six year old? How do you keep from blushing while you are answering? Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Ellie for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

OH my, tooo funny and as a mother who raised four boys, there's a lot of truth to this very short contest entry. You did a great job with it. Good luck.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Barbara for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! 4 boys??! I just have the one boy, 2 daughters also. Boys are much easier I have found!! Kindest regards...:)