Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "CareFree Days of Summer"A book of Poetry & Writing
106 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Great choice of artwork. Wonderful reflection that a majority can relate too.... first love and fun. A learning experience until the righter person comes along. Expressive. Nice work.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Great choice of artwork. Wonderful reflection that a majority can relate too.... first love and fun. A learning experience until the righter person comes along. Expressive. Nice work.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Bina1
This is so lovely! Everyone must have a similar thought, back to their youth, their first love. Thank you for sharing, a delight to read!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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This is so lovely! Everyone must have a similar thought, back to their youth, their first love. Thank you for sharing, a delight to read!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This one is very sweet, nostalgic and gentle with the delightful picture to illustrate. Your rhyming was excellent. I found the poem a pleasure to read, because it reminded me of the tree in front of our house where young people have scratched their initials, Giddy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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This one is very sweet, nostalgic and gentle with the delightful picture to illustrate. Your rhyming was excellent. I found the poem a pleasure to read, because it reminded me of the tree in front of our house where young people have scratched their initials, Giddy
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from words
I enjoyed your nostalgic write.
I think those first stirring of love are often the strongest and are burned in our hearts.
We are so open and unguarded in our first loves.
d
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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I enjoyed your nostalgic write.
I think those first stirring of love are often the strongest and are burned in our hearts.
We are so open and unguarded in our first loves.
d
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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thank you d
Comment from Supe
Love the picture you chose to compliment your words. This is cute and moving. Do you remember?
Love the last line. It is amazing what we remember and maybe for entirely different reasons. The first kiss. Now that's something to remember.
I look forward to more. Nice write.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Love the picture you chose to compliment your words. This is cute and moving. Do you remember?
Love the last line. It is amazing what we remember and maybe for entirely different reasons. The first kiss. Now that's something to remember.
I look forward to more. Nice write.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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thank you for the review
Comment from judiverse
Reminds me of the song "The Way We Were." This is an idealized summer romance, very sweetly described. There are still memories of the first kiss, the disco dancing. "White knights in satin" is a lovely phrase. People change, but the memories remain. The boy probably remembers too. Excellent rhyme and flow in this. You might want to try "What of the promise never to part?" judi
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Reminds me of the song "The Way We Were." This is an idealized summer romance, very sweetly described. There are still memories of the first kiss, the disco dancing. "White knights in satin" is a lovely phrase. People change, but the memories remain. The boy probably remembers too. Excellent rhyme and flow in this. You might want to try "What of the promise never to part?" judi
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
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You're so welcome. judi
Comment from Caressa_08
The title, great pic & poem are all in unison.....Great read, for all who are still young at heart, even if age can make the white knight in satin, seem a lil tarnished, except for those keepsake memories.... Yes, Oh , those beautiful memories that has kept a young love alive..Thanks for sharing & think, "Carefree Days of Summer" is deserving of six stars.
Caressa
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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The title, great pic & poem are all in unison.....Great read, for all who are still young at heart, even if age can make the white knight in satin, seem a lil tarnished, except for those keepsake memories.... Yes, Oh , those beautiful memories that has kept a young love alive..Thanks for sharing & think, "Carefree Days of Summer" is deserving of six stars.
Caressa
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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again thank you for the great review
Comment from JM
Such sweet words. Your poem took me back to my first love. We were both so green but then again so was everybody else. We were in middle school. Your poem reads very smoothly and I like the rhyme.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Such sweet words. Your poem took me back to my first love. We were both so green but then again so was everybody else. We were in middle school. Your poem reads very smoothly and I like the rhyme.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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thank you JM
Comment from DSMalott
Very nice.
Brought back to my mind several summer experiences with fun and childhood love.
The nicely place ending rhymes really enhanced the flow of the poem, while pushing my mind forward to the next lines.
Your nostalgic finish with wondering 'would I remember...' was classic.
Enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Very nice.
Brought back to my mind several summer experiences with fun and childhood love.
The nicely place ending rhymes really enhanced the flow of the poem, while pushing my mind forward to the next lines.
Your nostalgic finish with wondering 'would I remember...' was classic.
Enjoyed it.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thanks Doug
Comment from pearlecat
Ah yes...first love. You present it well. I also remember the disco. Lol Very well written about innocent first love and the wonderment of later years.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Ah yes...first love. You present it well. I also remember the disco. Lol Very well written about innocent first love and the wonderment of later years.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the review
Gary