Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Malerie
Great piece for such times as theses. You have created a very emotional piece that reflects the trails of our present time.
"Will the future reveal that tyrants drugged mankind to extinction or will humanity arise"
That is the powerful question; only God knows the answer. Thanks for sharing.
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Great piece for such times as theses. You have created a very emotional piece that reflects the trails of our present time.
"Will the future reveal that tyrants drugged mankind to extinction or will humanity arise"
That is the powerful question; only God knows the answer. Thanks for sharing.
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thank you
Comment from Tegan1311
This is a very well written poem. Your words flow well, your message and questions are clear and easy to understand. Having just watched, "Noah" this is especially fitting for me to read. Your poem is full of emotion and the questions have depth. Well done.
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This is a very well written poem. Your words flow well, your message and questions are clear and easy to understand. Having just watched, "Noah" this is especially fitting for me to read. Your poem is full of emotion and the questions have depth. Well done.
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thank you
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Deepwater,
Your concern over everyday happening loss and destruction because of war which seems unstoppable. Until and unless, the brains are not washed with 'understanding of the humanity soap' of those evils of the society who are thinking only one side or pretend, there is no chances of peace in this world. Nobody is here till today's date thinking to bring 'the project for the salvation of this destiny' because here in this world humanity is totally died and almost needed to take a birth of a magical supernatural power, otherwise everyday same thing happens killing and feeling glory on it. Very nice poem attempting for humanity arise and end of domination over racism. Best regards. Kamal
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Dear Deepwater,
Your concern over everyday happening loss and destruction because of war which seems unstoppable. Until and unless, the brains are not washed with 'understanding of the humanity soap' of those evils of the society who are thinking only one side or pretend, there is no chances of peace in this world. Nobody is here till today's date thinking to bring 'the project for the salvation of this destiny' because here in this world humanity is totally died and almost needed to take a birth of a magical supernatural power, otherwise everyday same thing happens killing and feeling glory on it. Very nice poem attempting for humanity arise and end of domination over racism. Best regards. Kamal
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Thanks for your review
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Every line here is powerful and filled with foreboding. I agree that these are the worst times since the bombing of Pearl Harbor. The current govt is not able to deal with the may problems we face, unfortunately. And other govts are crumbling and changing elsewhere. Can anyone hold off the utlimate disaster?
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Every line here is powerful and filled with foreboding. I agree that these are the worst times since the bombing of Pearl Harbor. The current govt is not able to deal with the may problems we face, unfortunately. And other govts are crumbling and changing elsewhere. Can anyone hold off the utlimate disaster?
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Thank you for the review
Comment from Diny
Your name is very fitting for your thoughts are likened to deep waters so well As they run still and haunting, it was a pleasure to pause here. Love that last line - Write On!- Di
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Your name is very fitting for your thoughts are likened to deep waters so well As they run still and haunting, it was a pleasure to pause here. Love that last line - Write On!- Di
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Thank you Diny
Comment from RGstar
Many rhetorical questions here, and I am not certain mankind have the answers, for long have we toiled in both repercussion and want.
Deep questions, yet they could go long unanswered.
Goosd write.
Best wishes,
RGstar
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Many rhetorical questions here, and I am not certain mankind have the answers, for long have we toiled in both repercussion and want.
Deep questions, yet they could go long unanswered.
Goosd write.
Best wishes,
RGstar
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Thank you RG
Comment from bard owl
This is a very thought-provoking, powerful poem. The questions asked are designed to make the reader take into account all that has happened and that which will happen, decided by the road we choose to follow. Excellent imagery. Blessings, Linda
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This is a very thought-provoking, powerful poem. The questions asked are designed to make the reader take into account all that has happened and that which will happen, decided by the road we choose to follow. Excellent imagery. Blessings, Linda
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Thanks Linda
Comment from mauial
The destruction of the flood did more than wipe away wicked men, it wiped away the violent hybrid children of angels who forsook their place in heaven to take wives on earth. The flood wiped out the hybrid children and since then the wicked angels (demons) have been restricted from materializing and continuing what they did before the flood.
Can you imagine what the earth would be like if God had not taken action? It would be worse. But He will bring the present conditions to an end soon. Man hasn't the power to do it.
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The destruction of the flood did more than wipe away wicked men, it wiped away the violent hybrid children of angels who forsook their place in heaven to take wives on earth. The flood wiped out the hybrid children and since then the wicked angels (demons) have been restricted from materializing and continuing what they did before the flood.
Can you imagine what the earth would be like if God had not taken action? It would be worse. But He will bring the present conditions to an end soon. Man hasn't the power to do it.
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thank you for the review
Comment from Chrisfiore
Hi deepwater,
Interesting concept, the destructive nature of mankind needing to once again seek the ark of salvation.
Was it merely for mankind to rise up and destroy himself that the original ark was built? Not hardly! Surely the Creator of all things will not allow that to happen.
We are on a destructive course which there seems to be no way out of, but thankfully our paths will be made right in time, not by our own hand but by God's.
I enjoyed your poem, it inspires one to think. ;). Chrisfiore
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Hi deepwater,
Interesting concept, the destructive nature of mankind needing to once again seek the ark of salvation.
Was it merely for mankind to rise up and destroy himself that the original ark was built? Not hardly! Surely the Creator of all things will not allow that to happen.
We are on a destructive course which there seems to be no way out of, but thankfully our paths will be made right in time, not by our own hand but by God's.
I enjoyed your poem, it inspires one to think. ;). Chrisfiore
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thanks chris
Comment from Dawny53
I really need to read your book, as this has my curiosity up. As far back as I can remember in my own lifetime the world has been a scary place. I believe it always has been and always will be
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I really need to read your book, as this has my curiosity up. As far back as I can remember in my own lifetime the world has been a scary place. I believe it always has been and always will be
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
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thank you