Writings From the Heart
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Comment from madhatter1977
Hi, Deepwater, this is a powerful poem mixing sci-fi aliens with angels and Gods in their puzzlement over man and womankind. The rhyme is excellent and the flow. The picture beautifully complements the poem too. Best wishes, Hatter
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Hi, Deepwater, this is a powerful poem mixing sci-fi aliens with angels and Gods in their puzzlement over man and womankind. The rhyme is excellent and the flow. The picture beautifully complements the poem too. Best wishes, Hatter
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you Hatter
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, you captured my intense interest from the very first line of this splendid poem, deepwater - what a concept! One suggestion, and it's minor - a question mark after, "...does she hold(?)"
Excellent! Wonderful rhyme, near-rhyme and flow, but even better imagery evoked.
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Wow, you captured my intense interest from the very first line of this splendid poem, deepwater - what a concept! One suggestion, and it's minor - a question mark after, "...does she hold(?)"
Excellent! Wonderful rhyme, near-rhyme and flow, but even better imagery evoked.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. A strong message and strong questions. It may work better with more space. It was too dense...and the poem is so good that it feels like it deserves space.
I think the line about peace is brilliant.
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Hi. A strong message and strong questions. It may work better with more space. It was too dense...and the poem is so good that it feels like it deserves space.
I think the line about peace is brilliant.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Gary
Comment from Lastamen
Thought provoking questions are poised in this poignant rendition all the while this rendering of the Son of Man ponders His weary creation. So much to answer for - we would do better to reflect upon these answers. Well done.
Till the last amen
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Thought provoking questions are poised in this poignant rendition all the while this rendering of the Son of Man ponders His weary creation. So much to answer for - we would do better to reflect upon these answers. Well done.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Gary
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Great muse! A man has no choice than to succumb to the game plans here on earth as he has no such powers of gods to unilaterally take a decision of his journey through the earth. I love this power point: "Woman's balance love or war, what status does she hold."
ola thomas
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Great muse! A man has no choice than to succumb to the game plans here on earth as he has no such powers of gods to unilaterally take a decision of his journey through the earth. I love this power point: "Woman's balance love or war, what status does she hold."
ola thomas
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you OLA
Comment from thedreampeddler
Fantastic poem, however, sadly, the answer is no.
Many would,no doubt, disagree, but they would be mistaken.
This world has never known sympathy for strangers, and many of those strangers are their own children.
Great poem.
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Fantastic poem, however, sadly, the answer is no.
Many would,no doubt, disagree, but they would be mistaken.
This world has never known sympathy for strangers, and many of those strangers are their own children.
Great poem.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was quite the stirring poem. Great rhythm to it. I liked the imagery of the world and the creation now disrupted by war and desolation. The ending was an about face and vvery moving. Gretchen
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This was quite the stirring poem. Great rhythm to it. I liked the imagery of the world and the creation now disrupted by war and desolation. The ending was an about face and vvery moving. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Deepwater,
Your poem is really circulating the realistic moment to be in this Earth. There is everything to be tolerated by the human. As there is pain of war, pain of population and betrayal. Love and peace are the gifts of Gods, but sometimes this holy land gets trouble with the evil's attack which makes corrupted the beauty of society. And your seeking of being human, all are beautifully imagined. Very nice short piece of rhyming pattern, really has touched my heart. Thanks and regards. Kamal
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Dear Deepwater,
Your poem is really circulating the realistic moment to be in this Earth. There is everything to be tolerated by the human. As there is pain of war, pain of population and betrayal. Love and peace are the gifts of Gods, but sometimes this holy land gets trouble with the evil's attack which makes corrupted the beauty of society. And your seeking of being human, all are beautifully imagined. Very nice short piece of rhyming pattern, really has touched my heart. Thanks and regards. Kamal
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from lappmellott
Great job on the poem and I simply love the photograph you chose to accompany it. I have to wonder sometimes just what is happening in this world today. But then I remember how Jesus Christ was crucified and was put to death.
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Great job on the poem and I simply love the photograph you chose to accompany it. I have to wonder sometimes just what is happening in this world today. But then I remember how Jesus Christ was crucified and was put to death.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from RGstar
Some rhetorical questions here, my friend, yet I wonder if they will ever be answered?
The limitations of man has long been tested, and the vastness of the unknown has not even began the testing.
Only time will tell..I wonder if we will ever find the answer?
Best wishes,
Rgstar
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014
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Some rhetorical questions here, my friend, yet I wonder if they will ever be answered?
The limitations of man has long been tested, and the vastness of the unknown has not even began the testing.
Only time will tell..I wonder if we will ever find the answer?
Best wishes,
Rgstar
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
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Thank you RG