Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Good Haiku. The syllable count is accurate. It meets the requirements of the prompt. The picture enhances it perfectly. Good job.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thank you judy for your feedback :) kindest regards...

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

A-w-w-w-w. This was so cute. The little girl sure does look as if she is concentrating very hard, to get that nail polish on mom, or sister...whomever it might be she's applying it to, just--right. Budding cosmetologist, huh? Could be, could be...

Well done, and good luck to you in the contest.

~Dean :)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thank you Dean for your great feedback and good luck wishes :) Yep, she has to do everything --just--so!
Kind regards...:)

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Aug-2014

Ah, a budding perfectionist as well, then? very cool!:)

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Aug-2014

Oh...and you're welcome (sorry about that!)...

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Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

I love this! So dear. Little girls can be so "girly", and nail polish beckons to them like nothing else. I've seen both men and women sporting manicures given by three year olds. I hope you do well in this contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Hi Green Lake Girl :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

This is adorable! She is just too cute. Indeed, concentration. This is just a perfect presentation for an entry.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Hi Jax :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Raphael Montonaro

Excellent

Very nice Haiku poem. Great turning line also. Good message.
Very well written. Good form also. This is what Haiku should be. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Hi Raphael :) Thank you so much for your great feedback. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job presenting the imagery of the situation in a short poem form. I love the picture. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Hi sweetwoodjax :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes this one raises a chuckle - engrossed in the activity - augurs very well for future tasks requiring application and discipline

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you zanya for your feedback :) kindest regards...

Comment from GeraldS

Excellent

This is a cute poem with a cute picture illustrating it. Overall the presentation is clever and excellent. This should be a contender on its charm alone.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thank you Gerald for your lovely feedback :) kindest regards...:)