Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

HAHAHAHA - yesiree, that's surely me. I LOVE the strong verb, and the whole topic is hilarious - no doubt will resonate with many. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

Thanks, Dawn

Comment from mkflood

Excellent

very cool. i just wanted to personally thank u for selecting my work. its an honor to have my work included with urs. thanks again and great job overall..mkflood

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014

Thank you for the opportunity to use it.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Weight
scarfs down fat on my plate-
Fate

Excellent syllable count for the prompt 1-6-1
love the choice of topic and the presentation
good luck in te contest

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014

Thank you for the great review.

Comment from JM

Excellent

You must be a woman because it seems "weight" targets the female physique so that everything we eat goes to our hips. Remember "Fate" is "fat" without the e. Cute poem.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014

You are very observant. thanks for reviewing.

Comment from JudyS

Excellent

This is a super cute entry to this contest. Very original and sadly so true. Love the pix of the guy diving into the chocolate cake. Perfect! Best of luck in the contest, Judy

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014

Thanks for the great review.