Those Best Laid Plans
5=7=5 Story in a poem20 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
A complete story in a 5-7-5. It even has things to ponder and nuances. Very deftly delivered. I cs
cant imagine this getting beat.
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A complete story in a 5-7-5. It even has things to ponder and nuances. Very deftly delivered. I cs
cant imagine this getting beat.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this 5-7-5 Poetry Contest entry is quite creative with a different approach to the dark side. Intriguing thoughts in deception. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this 5-7-5 Poetry Contest entry is quite creative with a different approach to the dark side. Intriguing thoughts in deception. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
well from the picture mikey dressed in its night attire reading down the blood of this excellent pen flows out excellent pen pal
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well from the picture mikey dressed in its night attire reading down the blood of this excellent pen flows out excellent pen pal
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from tfawcus
An entertaining entry with an eye-catching layout that should help it along in the contest. Firing blanks. I'm at that age, too.
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An entertaining entry with an eye-catching layout that should help it along in the contest. Firing blanks. I'm at that age, too.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
Comment from robina1978
Nice looking female with a gun. The your little poem that tells her story ina 5-7-5. I don't think that was easy to do. But it woked well and very original. Best wishes for the contest.
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Nice looking female with a gun. The your little poem that tells her story ina 5-7-5. I don't think that was easy to do. But it woked well and very original. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
Comment from Nosha17
I am not sure who got shot, but someone did! Well chosen words to convey your message. Great pic, good luck in the contest. Faye
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I am not sure who got shot, but someone did! Well chosen words to convey your message. Great pic, good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. That last sentence is scary. I don't know if the first person just meant to scare. I don't know if the last person did not have blanks too. But I know it is a game I would not like to play. Great work.
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I love the picture. I love the poem. That last sentence is scary. I don't know if the first person just meant to scare. I don't know if the last person did not have blanks too. But I know it is a game I would not like to play. Great work.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
Comment from emrpoems
An unusual take on the 5-7-5 prompt
Love the use of dialogue and the intrigue that it incorporates.
fantastic presentation
Best of luck in the contest
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An unusual take on the 5-7-5 prompt
Love the use of dialogue and the intrigue that it incorporates.
fantastic presentation
Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
Comment from Linda Engel
Oh yes I wish I had had that gun a few times. She switched bullets. Good for her. nothing like a woman scorned. good one, Mike.
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Oh yes I wish I had had that gun a few times. She switched bullets. Good for her. nothing like a woman scorned. good one, Mike.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
A scene played out at the end of many movies. However, this is the shortest and most to-the-point version I have ever seen or read. Fun little poem.
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A scene played out at the end of many movies. However, this is the shortest and most to-the-point version I have ever seen or read. Fun little poem.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014