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Expressing Myself

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "ANSWER: Anger"
Writing my way out of depression / mental illness

3 total reviews 
Comment from Justin Chopin
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Loved the honesty you have put in this piece. I also enjoyed how you expanded the format of the poem to be a conversation between you and your friend. Very lyrical very intelligent poetry that I think most people especially men can relate to. Great job.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
    Justin, you have made my night! I am so glad you liked this write. Wasn't sure how it would go over. Thank you for your generous rating!
reply by Justin Chopin on 24-Nov-2014
    You're welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent
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So good. It's true--if I'm reading this correctly. Poor self esteem (doormat) and we just stuff ourselves when we may not even be hungry. Yes, awareness is the way out.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much BeasPeas!!
Comment from Drew Delaney
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This is very cute, How do people come up with things like this, I'll never know. I think my brain is too dull to be quirky and too serious to just have some fun. This was a joy to read.

I wish you luck in the prompt.

Such fun! Drew

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much Drew, so glad you enjoyed it!