Comment from Samuel Dickens

Excellent

HA! This is funny and so well-written. When you think about the countless genes we each carry, it boggles the mind. Me, I got Dad's skinny legs and Mom's proclivity towards heart disease. I can live with the skinny legs.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014

Hi Samuel :) thank you for your great review. Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

This is funny. We all inherit one thing or another from our parents that we would rather not have. If it's only physical appearance we are lucky.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014

Hi judy :) thank you for your great review. Kind regards, Debra :)

Comment from Imogen JH

Excellent

Don't know if you will get this review. I certainly will not be able to get any reply because my profile is closed. But it seems I might be able to play around on here with one or two functions still.

Anyway, this is funny stuff. The first stanza is brilliant, the second more so. I might have been a bit more forthcoming with my words in the third stanza, but that is just me. Got my vote, head and shoulders above the competition.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014

Cheers Imogen :) x

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yeah, but what are great mammaries without nice legs to accompany them? Just a coupled of withered stalks lugging around a some ripe melons, LOL...

Good stuff, and good luck in the contest. I really liked the vintage black & white presentation of this one. :)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thank you, Dean for your great response and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kind regards...

reply by Dean Kuch on 17-Dec-2014

Anytime... :)

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

It seems that we're always wanting what we don't have. You don't always get what you want. But if you try sometimes, you just might get what you need. Phrase is there, thanks to the Rolling Stones. I enjoyed reading this rather humorous poetic thought transference... John

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Hi John, thank you for your great feedback. I love that Rolling Stones song :) kind regards...

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Did not see the breasts coming in the last verse.
Laugh out loud moment in the house. Very embarrassing. thank you very much.
Loved it
GMG

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for your great feedback. Glad to share a laugh with you! Kind regards...:)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is quite a funny poem about your body. I inherited different body parts from an array of relatives so I look like I was put together by a committee.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thank you so much for your great feedback :) I'm sure you inherited everyone's 'best bits'! Kindest regards...:)

reply by patcelaw on 17-Dec-2014

I am not sure they are the best ones, but it is what it is. :-)