Beautiful Death
Viewing comments for Chapter 10031 "Brother where are you"from birth I have longed for death
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a strong poem. You show each of your brothers and it's touching. I though it was an interesting way to present it. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
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I thought this was a strong poem. You show each of your brothers and it's touching. I though it was an interesting way to present it. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
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Thank you again.
Everything I do needs work, it is a form of treating depression just to write.
Comment from MissElizabethV
Though many can relate to the struggles of growing up in a large family centered around religion, this poem felt a little forced.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
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Though many can relate to the struggles of growing up in a large family centered around religion, this poem felt a little forced.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
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I have been working on it, cannot seem to get it right.
Thank you for your helpful reply.