Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I like how you talk to the fish! What an enjoyable read. I think you caught the enjoyment of fishing between a father and a child. And especially through the eyes of a child. Just terrific!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. Really do appreciate them very much.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello author a bed time story sounds more like a horror story you would tell at Halloween around a campfire
Look at this-

the water below it( Dad) knowing I could not swim.

Gert

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.

reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Jul-2015

You are welcome Brett Matthew West
Gert

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Exceptional

An excellent creepy story of father and son fishing trip to the lake. I don't understand the ending. Did the boy die? I thought he did but then he kills the dad and he walks away? Good job either way.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015

He died, but in exchange for revenging his death, and providing grub for the sea creatures, he was restored back to life by the first sea creature introduced in the story. Glad you enjoyed this little fishing trip adventure.

Comment from ellie6

Excellent

Wow! you took me completely by surprise. Brilliant characterisation. I wasn't expecting a horror story. No nits that I can find .

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments and support.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, brett, I'm glad I know how to swim. me and my dad used to go fishing together too. but her never threw me in the water, couldn't do that to his girls....I enjoyed reading this and was glad the dad ended up being fish bait

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015

Just a little twist that seemed to make sense. Glad you enjoyed the tale.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Brett, well that's something a little different for you mate and I enjoyed it. Talk about revenge, watch out for the little guy and when you least expect it expect it huh. Great stuff Sir....

Just one little spag..

"before sprinting down the pier covered with moister(moisture) from the morning dew."

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015

Always appreciate your comments and support. Thank you very much indeed.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

The tale is whimsical, for a murder-for-insurance story, with a talking shark and a dead narrator. The ending was a bit uneven, I feel, as it appears the boy is alive and not dead. How I love to rationalize fantasy.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments and support as always. The creature gave the boy back his life in exchange for the grub was the point I was trying to relate.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Entertaining, enjoyable read filled with surprises. Happy ending is my favorite kind. Very well done, Brett. You have a knack for telling stories. :)

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments nd support. Appreciate them very much.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

OH my I couldn't read fast enough to get to the end.
Very nicely written with the twist on the end.
How did he come back to life? Just asking
Interresting and held my interest.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015

Have to leave something to the imagination. Thanks for your comments and support s always. Real do appreciate them very much.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Brett,

I really enjoyed reading this story too. I guess the dad, who killed his son, now met his waterloo and the boy is alive again. This was nicely written and an interesting read. I look forward to more of your stories.

Kat

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments and support as always. Appreciate them very much indeed.

reply by MizKat on 19-Jun-2015

You're so welcome my friend.