Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Poetic in structuring writer details an excellent selection of items for this work stir writing telling the reader light of moon draws them like a werewolf bring forth animal behaviors great gateway for reader imagination

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015

Thank you TPAC, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Well this is the perfect lune to write about luna. Beautiful image to accompany your words. Who doesn't love a full moon? Nice job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015

Thank you Marily, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Gypsy Blue Rose
I like your few clever words about how tempting when in the light of the full moon what it can do--
makes one desire a moon bath

Gert

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thank you Gert, I appreciate your review. :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Jun-2015

You are welcome
Gert

Comment from ruzu27

Excellent

Even without Beethoven's lovely music I like your Lune very much.
The poem is correct, the text makes sense and the lovely picture illustrates tje atmosphere. I wish you all the best in the contest.
Ruth

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thank you very much ruth, I appreciate your comments and review. :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love being under the light of the moon, it is just so special. me and a friend went skinnydipping at three o'clock in the morning one time. that felt wonderful. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

thank you sweetwoodjax, I appreciate your review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi...

_ This is a great presentation.
_ And Beethoven, who could fault him? NOPE--not me.
_ Beautiful entry.
_ Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thank you Jax, I appreciate your excellent review.

Comment from DreamtwithClarity

Excellent

An outstanding read, full of wonder. I like the way in which you composed your writing, showing your own identity through your writing and carrying it over to the reader where we might learn a little bit about you through the process of reading it. Good work and thank you for writing.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thank you dreamtwithclarity, I appreciate your excellent review.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Very sensual. The moon has always been related to romance and mystery. Love the last line. Never thought of it as a moon bath. Very creative. Great job. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

thank you glasstruth, I appreciate your excellent review.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

ah a moon bath - great satori line and I can just pictured basking in the moonlight. Perfect lune form. good luck to you.
teresa

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thank you Teresa, I appreciate your review. :)

Comment from Julia.

Excellent

This little poem meets the 5-3-5 syllable requirements of the form. The allure of the moon is always a good topic for a poem. I do think that the first line could be stronger if you eliminated the "the" and added another word elsewhere in the line. For example, "full moon draws me in" (or something like that--something to add meaning). Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015

Thank you Julia, you make a good point. Thank you for your review.