2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "haiku (Tears of Salty Sea)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
7 total reviews
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Looks peaceful. Tranquility. Yes, it is nice to listen to the waves crash and the sea salt splashing upon your face. It describes a moment in detail It must be summer or spring. Awe, my thoughts take me there. Great poem and entry for contest. Good luck. wackydo
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Looks peaceful. Tranquility. Yes, it is nice to listen to the waves crash and the sea salt splashing upon your face. It describes a moment in detail It must be summer or spring. Awe, my thoughts take me there. Great poem and entry for contest. Good luck. wackydo
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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thank you wackydo, you are very kind
Comment from Curly Girly
This sums up a visit to the beach quite nicely...
Tears of salty sea
cool wind caresses my face
feet covered with sand
There is nothing as pure as an ocean breeze.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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This sums up a visit to the beach quite nicely...
Tears of salty sea
cool wind caresses my face
feet covered with sand
There is nothing as pure as an ocean breeze.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you Curly Girl, I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from jmdg1954
Tears of salty sea
cool wind caresses my face
feet covered with sand
I'm no poet, for sure, but it appears you have captured the contest and it's rules putting together a solid haiku.
John
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Tears of salty sea
cool wind caresses my face
feet covered with sand
I'm no poet, for sure, but it appears you have captured the contest and it's rules putting together a solid haiku.
John
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you John, I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, great imagery in this haiku, especially the second line which is my favorite. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, great imagery in this haiku, especially the second line which is my favorite. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you sweetwoodjax, I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition.I love the words that you have chosen and the excellent artwork, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition.I love the words that you have chosen and the excellent artwork, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you Eric, I appreciate your kind review.
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from TAB_that's me
You have some good imagery in this haiku. I'm not sure that you have a satori line though, good luck to you in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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You have some good imagery in this haiku. I'm not sure that you have a satori line though, good luck to you in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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thank you Teresa, I appreciate your review
Comment from June Mae
I really enjoyed this poem. As the prompt asked, in includes a haiku on a seasonal reference. The poem is very sensory, with its strong beach imagery. I also liked the alliteration, and how the images move from top to bottom. Well crafted--
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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I really enjoyed this poem. As the prompt asked, in includes a haiku on a seasonal reference. The poem is very sensory, with its strong beach imagery. I also liked the alliteration, and how the images move from top to bottom. Well crafted--
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you june, I really appreciate your review. :)