Comment from
Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There always has to be a pie, normally a lemon meringue, after something like this. I was expecting them to sit up and throw it. Lol, Bill, you have one heck of an imagination!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
I thought the pie would be unexpected.
Comment from
Gloria ....
I laughed even though it didn't make a whole lot of sense. Does it have something to do with unemployed clowns? Or only clowns are weird enough to carry sledge hammers inside their jackets? Or, there's always a pie in the face at the end of the tunnel?
I give up, but like most slapstick comedy I did laugh.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
Comment from
Jay Squires
I think you had a lot of fun with this, Bill. I didn't quite understand where you were going with it. But now that I mention it, it had about the same relevance as the Three Stooges sketches.
This makes me wonder, is that is your intent with this little sketch?
I honestly don't know how to critique it.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015