Comment from Linda Kay

Excellent

You did a great job describing a delicious orchard. You followed a good pattern for each tree and stayed within the syllable count. I think it is hard sometimes to connect things with such a small word limit, and you did it well.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015

Thank you Linda, you are very kind.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This set of five-seven-fives, Trees, is presented and phrased in a way that reminds us of the miracle of fruit-bearing trees and all the good stuff related to them.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015

Thank you Bill, I appreciate your review and stars :)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hello Author,

I think you did a great job in writing this Stacked 5-7-5 poem. I love the pictures you put with each verse too. You did a wonderful job both writing and finding the pictures. Bravo!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you MizKat :)

reply by MizKat on 16-Jul-2015

Bravo!!!

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Trees, indeed tank God for the trees, without them there would be not much life,
these are beautiful Haiku poems. I enjoyed reading them, God bless you. Hugs! Lakeport.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you Lakeport :)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Each of these are creative. They each stand alone and also go together as a whole. Perfect syllable counts. Good luck.
teresa

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you Teresa. :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

okay, you've made me hungry for peaches and green pears now, I don't care for the ripe ones, they're too sweet, I like tart. I've been on a fruit kick lately. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you jax :)

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly with multiple stanzas all meeting the syllable count restriction. I enjoyed your spin on the various fruit trees. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you Mystic Angel :)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

These are well done 5-7-5 poems with nice imagery and lovely pictures chosen to accompany the poems. Syllable counts are correct. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you Jeanie :)

Comment from danpald

Excellent

Delightful treat to eat
The fruit upon the trees
Given with each picture
The fruits looks even better

Well done the count
The contest made to play
Good luck with the vote
As soon it will be under way

I add here a question:
How did you get the various pictures?
I wanted to place a picture for each stanza
Just like you did but do not know how here???

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you Danpald, you are very kind. :)

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Yum! What a delicious poem. There's a rhythm that sounds really wonderful when read aloud. My favorite verse was the one with the pear. The overall setup with pictures works beautifully. Good luck with the contest. Les

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

Thank you Les :)