Crying
No true love.5 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Twinkle Toes, I know I should check your site out more...because I miss your poems if I don't....YOU NEED TO TELL ME...I am so sorry...your poem broke my heart Dos because there are more today lonely then not...and the thing about true love...is that you have to feel it in your heart...I am so sorry your smiles cries...because it is a beautiful smile...sigh...trying to call...can't get through...love ya you...now take care...Uno...xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Hi Twinkle Toes, I know I should check your site out more...because I miss your poems if I don't....YOU NEED TO TELL ME...I am so sorry...your poem broke my heart Dos because there are more today lonely then not...and the thing about true love...is that you have to feel it in your heart...I am so sorry your smiles cries...because it is a beautiful smile...sigh...trying to call...can't get through...love ya you...now take care...Uno...xxoo
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Hi Uno! My phone and internet were off within a few days of me getting them back on. Not even my mistakes! But, I'm back on again. Will call you soon. Dos
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Hey you, scared Dos...so glad to see you...will call...loveeeeeeeee ya you...Uno...xxoo
Comment from TPAC
Writer tender statements warms the hearth with compassion, thoughts in write slamming in descriptive defining a great read
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
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Writer tender statements warms the hearth with compassion, thoughts in write slamming in descriptive defining a great read
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
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Thank you, TPAC, for your thoughts.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. You deliver some pretty profound wisdom in this well penned piece - they don't find that lasting love for they allow passion to rule which has no solid foundation upon which to build something eternal. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly. You deliver some pretty profound wisdom in this well penned piece - they don't find that lasting love for they allow passion to rule which has no solid foundation upon which to build something eternal. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
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Mystic Angel 777: thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Comment from pbroussard209
Love is a strange creature, and to know true love, well how do you tell if it is real or imaginary? I thought I had found it twice before, my soul mates I loved them with all my heart, but it was not meant to be, they did not love me back the same way. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Love is a strange creature, and to know true love, well how do you tell if it is real or imaginary? I thought I had found it twice before, my soul mates I loved them with all my heart, but it was not meant to be, they did not love me back the same way. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you, pbroussard209, for reading and commenting.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a beautifully presented and really good entry for this particular competition, Good rhyming and proximate rhyming with a lovely flow. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Hi Mystery author, this is a beautifully presented and really good entry for this particular competition, Good rhyming and proximate rhyming with a lovely flow. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Eric1 - thank you so much for taking a moment to review this piece.
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You are very welcome my friend
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You are very welcome my friend