I'm Not Beggin
Lost that lovin feelin16 total reviews
Comment from meggie13
He did not deserve you. Sometimes a man does not know how good he has it until he loses it. Your feelings towards him are just what he deserves. Well written and the last line made me laugh . Congratulations on your win!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
He did not deserve you. Sometimes a man does not know how good he has it until he loses it. Your feelings towards him are just what he deserves. Well written and the last line made me laugh . Congratulations on your win!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015
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Thank you Momma.. Now, sweet Southern Dreams xoxo
❤💜💛
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You are welcome , my dear girl. Sweet dreams, to my don't take no nonsense from anyone daughter. love my sweet girl.
Comment from pickmeplease
I've known a few like this...I connected to several of your lines. Upbeat and clearly are secure and have moved on. Would have given 6 stars if I had them. Good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
I've known a few like this...I connected to several of your lines. Upbeat and clearly are secure and have moved on. Would have given 6 stars if I had them. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Hi there:)...thanks for the great review PMP.
I appreciate every one I receive.:)
Always,
Missy
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Haha Knock him his ass Love it mystery writer..But I do not think for instant that you would ever be in a room with people and be alone...
TK
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
Haha Knock him his ass Love it mystery writer..But I do not think for instant that you would ever be in a room with people and be alone...
TK
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Awww TK. BLUSHING!!! Thanks hon for the sweet as pie review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Missy Murphy
That sounds like a challenge to one who like me mistook devotion for love. You might consider using a crowbar on me, I am impervious to 2 X 4's
Bear
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
Hey there Missy Murphy
That sounds like a challenge to one who like me mistook devotion for love. You might consider using a crowbar on me, I am impervious to 2 X 4's
Bear
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Lol... U big ol teddy bear. :) thank you for the amusing review :)
Always your fan,
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello poet
a different intake on lost love
but nevertheless it is love lost
nice work and creation
the rhyming couplets are well done
never did you stray from the title
the challenge has been met
I have to admit
a loss is usually sad
however I found humor in this entry
thank you for the smile the words bring
thank you for sharing
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
hello poet
a different intake on lost love
but nevertheless it is love lost
nice work and creation
the rhyming couplets are well done
never did you stray from the title
the challenge has been met
I have to admit
a loss is usually sad
however I found humor in this entry
thank you for the smile the words bring
thank you for sharing
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Thank you Ann Marie for the grand review. Have felt exactly this a couple of times but never acted on it.
Always
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. No weepy tears here as you have flat done had enough of this dude LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. No weepy tears here as you have flat done had enough of this dude LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Thanks MA777 for your review sweet lady. I appreciated always.
Always
Comment from dragonpoet
The speaker is a very smart woman to get away from a man that needed love more than he could give it. Although she is sad, it will not last. Maybe someone there will cause a beginning of a new love.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
The speaker is a very smart woman to get away from a man that needed love more than he could give it. Although she is sad, it will not last. Maybe someone there will cause a beginning of a new love.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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How right you are DragonP. Thanks for stopping by and leaving this well received review :)
Always
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You're welcome.
dp
Comment from barkingdog
This combination of pent up anger and despair have made this person ready to go ballistic on the one who no longer loves her. She's given enough and won't beg any more.
I'm staying out of her way. The girl means business.
:) e
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
This combination of pent up anger and despair have made this person ready to go ballistic on the one who no longer loves her. She's given enough and won't beg any more.
I'm staying out of her way. The girl means business.
:) e
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Aww...Yeah give her a wide berth...lol. Thanks for the review hon.
Always
Comment from lightink
This made me laugh and go "Hell yeah!". We all know that kind of men! That lack of happiness turned into a fierce, life affirming and self-protective rage! I love it!
Warmly,
Lightink
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
This made me laugh and go "Hell yeah!". We all know that kind of men! That lack of happiness turned into a fierce, life affirming and self-protective rage! I love it!
Warmly,
Lightink
Comment Written 06-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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HAHAHAHA!!! Thanks Lightink for getting it and I am happy it made you laugh :)
Always
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
I hope you win. I have got to tell you I started laughing over the artwork. It was more perfect than any I have ever seen. As I read your poem of course I was sad. Then I had to laugh again. Your ending line had me in stitches. Thank you so very much. This is just what the Doctor ordered. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
I hope you win. I have got to tell you I started laughing over the artwork. It was more perfect than any I have ever seen. As I read your poem of course I was sad. Then I had to laugh again. Your ending line had me in stitches. Thank you so very much. This is just what the Doctor ordered. Best wishes.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thank you Darlene hon :)
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I knew I knew that writing style from somewhere. LOL. Hon I just had to vote for that. It was the best of the best.
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I won!!!
Missy
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Woot Woot. That is fantastic. I am thrilled for you my friend. Great job. KUDOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!